Brilliantly written chapter.

I loved how you took the song and seamlessly integrated it into the story. Sad,yes,but amazing.

Yaay!

Harada twins bashing!

*jumps up and down happily while clapping hands giddily*

They really are so annoying!

If they were real I believe that they'd be the most annoying, preppiest preps in the world!

All I can say to that chapter is-well...wow. To think that this is your first fanfic-well, let me just say this.

If you keep writing the way you do, you should have no trouble with satifying your readers, that's for sure!

Looking forward to reading the rest of this!

Just keep writing to the best of your ability, and you'll do fine!

Happy Thanksgiving! I'm sure you'll be able to update soon.

omg i love diz soo much, chu cant have writers block! u can alwayz pick up from wer satoshi confessed lol like heres a thought:

satoshi confesses; daisuke jux stares at him in awe;

satoshi feels uncomfortable so he tells him why he loves daisuke & how&wen he fell in love woth him; daisuke

blushes madly & embraces satoshi in a hug, wrapping his arms around his neck; they pull back; daisuke also confesses;

satoshi wraps his arms around daisuke's waist &

daisuke still has arms around satoshi's neck; they

both look into each othas eyes & they both lean in

for an amazing kiss [lol]; they part; emiko comes in

& knocks at door; both depart really quickly; she

eyes satoshi; she says gud nite, but only to daisuke;

the both men go to sleep.

lol sorry for the lame outline, but i hope this wld be ebough to help u move on forward. i really like & enjoy diz fic so plz continue diz lol & btw, chu made a grammar error in french, wen chu put , chu out the wrong adjective. ur soppozd to change to hence the noun, is plural lol jux pointing that out D

In the next chapter have Daisuke respond to Satoshi's confession. Do a little more Harada bashing and have Emiko see Hikaris as something good.

I LIKE THIS STORY

for now only? aw

i love that song xDD

oh gettin really good1 please update soon! :)

omg, TWINCEST. rather strangely interposed, but it is your story. i'm sure you have a reason.

and keep going woth satoshi/daisuke. there must be love. D

looking forward to your next update.

well that was certainly different...he...please update soon!

wow this is very good and its different from what i have read inother stories please keep the good work up and PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

nice!

I hope you write more soon! It sucks that your computer deleted your stories. I hope you get it fixed!_ Ps I love your story!