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| shannyfish 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely beautiful!1 |
| Horatios Green Eyed Angel 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseHahaha brilliant story! lol "I was just - just checking - that..." Alexx muttered from the doorway, fighting with all her might not to grin. "I'm going back inside." hahahaha that was PRICELESS! Hahaha this story deserves a sequal! |
| HelloHandsomee 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusereally loved it. they are undeniably the ones. -- looking for more to come! |
| Jessi84 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. These two are just perfect for each other. Hope to read more of them soon. |
| Lionessmon 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseNice One! |
| Stumpycat2002 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusevery cute fic... nicely done can't wait to see what else you have lined up Donna |
| QueenKate 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! I loved it. The Alexx line is awesome...I can see her walking in (out) on them too!! ~kate |
| Murgy31 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! |
| Meggles8102 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. The two of them dancing definitely makes a hot story. |
| Lady aracne 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abusewoho love the Tango! |
| randomwriting 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, my, that was lovely. Not my pairing, but when written as well as this, I can see them through your eyes and appreciate your vision. I could all but see them on the dance floor as the passion began to build, finally culminating in a long-overdue kiss. 'He may seem like a work-aholic, but appearances were certainly deceptive with that man.' Isn't that the truth. Really nicely done. Truly enjoyable. |
| Royal Blue 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseOoh! That was really, really good!! I loved it! Great Job! |
| csimiamifreako 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseHAHA, I LOVE IT! I LOVE ALL STORIES THAT INVOLVE CLUBS AND DANCING! GOOD STORY! HAHA, I LIKED THE LAST LINE, THAT WAS FUNNY! LOL PMS!! |