Hm I'm not really sure what to say to this one. I have interested and it is promising very promising. I want to read more.

This was fantastic! Each line made an impact. You've achieved much with few words. A stellar look into Calleigh's mind, illustrating all the points I'd imagine her contemplating and struggling with. Her admiration of Horatio rang true and clear. Loved it!

I DONT REALLY KNOW WHAT TO SAY HERE EXCEPT THAT I LIKED IT AND IT WAS GOOD! I LIKED THE ANGLE OF THE STORY YOU TOOK! GOOD JOB!