|Reviews for Folie à Deux|
| ToManyLetters 3/6/08 . chapter 19
I was wondering when I'd be seeing an update for Folie à Deux. Very glad to see one.
Mm, Merlin, the time has come when all the chaos involving poor Ginny's 'abduction' comes to pass. I really do feel sorry for her - I try my hardest to defend her character against those that would claim her a Sue.
I love Pomona's strong desire to fire a sling of foul language in Lockhart's direction. She's not alone, of course, so many of us share her sympathies.
With the Severus and Minerva pairing, the whole "Weren't you saying..." and "Your moment has come at last..." lines fit so much better. The way the two feed off of one another appears nearly poetic with the relationship as a background.
Severus slapping Minerva seems a little uncalled for, I think. I see him more as manipulating his words to get to her on a more emotional level that with a physical level. It would have worked better with a different character or characterisation, I think.
Yay! Dumbledore is back.. now.. for the next chapter...
This story seems like it's approaching an end - what are your plans for it, lengthwise?
Good chapter, keep up the good work.
| loser by choice 3/6/08 . chapter 19
Revalations between Sev and Pommy? Poor dear isn't making him feel better talking that way. But Dumbledore's back! Whoo!
| hmm 3/6/08 . chapter 19
well id call this chapter just filler basically, i mean it was needed but at the same time we don't know whats up with the relationship, although i did like that little side conversation at the end. anyway it seems pretty weird because this story has turned pretty serious but i think thats just because the part of the story its taking place in so. omg it took forever for that update please update sooner this time! please!
| LisaT 3/6/08 . chapter 19
Oh, 'nother lovely chapter. I like the way this switches from humour to drama. BTW, I'm not sure it's necessary to explicitly state the POV at the top - the narrative should make that immediately obvious, especially since you're not using the first person. Lovely seeing a Pomona pov, though.
| Bergerac 3/6/08 . chapter 19
yay an update! i loved when severus slapped minerva, soo funny. and the conversation between pomona and snape. pretty much the entire chapter but thought i would tell you my favorite parts :) can't wait for the next update- seriously, i can't wait for the next update so please make it very soon :)
| Princess Gillybean 3/6/08 . chapter 19
ooh, nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
| smileymrd 3/6/08 . chapter 19
Although, I hope they get together! You've given me the impression that last night was just a fling!
I would love them to get together, after all they've been through aswell!
Brilliant chapter and so near the end of the 2nd book!
Please update soon!
| trulyamused 3/6/08 . chapter 19
Nice follow up to the last chapter. Somehow, I doubt they'll be able to keep their agreement though.
Thanks for the update.
| Ladybug21 3/6/08 . chapter 19
Nice chapter! A lot of direct HP quotes and such, but so much fun to see it all from Pomona's point of view! I have to say, I was cracking up when I read, "(Well, Albus maybe. Severus and Filius, on a good day. The centaurs, if…)" LOL! :)
And I loved loved LOVED the scene where Severus slapped Minerva. It was just so... human of him, for lack of a better description. It totally worked.
I also liked Severus and Pomona's awkward little conversation down in the dungeons. Very well done.
| Kurissyma san Tybalt 3/6/08 . chapter 19
No! Meanie Pomona! MINNIE AND SEVVY ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER! *pokes out tongue*
| Chemistress 3/5/08 . chapter 19
So much that happens on that morning after - if it were not so dramatic that would be just what one wishes for in order to be distracted from ones confused feelings ... Well at least Severus is now confident enough to slap her cheek to help her get her strengh back, not sure he would have done that a few days ago?
Pomona is just wonderful - ever so innocently telling him just what a stupid promise he has made early in the morning ...
| excessivelyperky 3/5/08 . chapter 19
Well, there were probably a couple of the Hufflepuffs who didn't cheer, but of course Pomona isn't going to notice them (sigh). And Snape probably has had to write death letters for students already; nobody seems to pay much attention to the Slytherin students except to slam them (or if they do well, say they should have been Sorted somewhere else).
Very good chapter, though, excellent mixing of canon with the ongoing story between Severus and Minerva. Adored seeing Gildlylocks discomfited; I always did love that part!
| selmak 3/5/08 . chapter 19
pomona is just pouring salt into an open wound, isn't she? I'm surprised that Snape didn't slap her!
| PunkZZZ 3/2/08 . chapter 18
I haven't been on here in so long; sorry for lack of reviews.
Oh, this chapter was so sweetly sad. Aw.
Minerva & Severus are cute.
| loser by choice 2/22/08 . chapter 18
As far as promises go, that one sucks. Badly. Poor... well both of them. And to think this started out as a comedy... Anyway, good read. Worth waiting for!