I like it!

This is lovely. A sense of caring that she can't quite place... I think it would be nice to have a sequel!

-RavenFox

I like it, but it leaves me wanting for more.

This is my favorite of your stories I’ve read so far. My only complaint is that you kept switching from present to past tense. Generally, stories sound better in past tense. Present tense could have worked well for this one though, if you would have stuck to it. Nothing a bit of editing couldn’t easily fix though. Nice job.

hey. Great fic. Please update! P

:)

Will you continue? You are one of my very few favourite Hermione/Snape authors and I wish you will give me some more stories.

Is this one meant to be only a one-shot? It feels very unfinished.

Oh if only it were true... so what happens when he wakes up?

I think it is a good story, not a soppy one. It could be a prequel of a bvelivable Hermione - Snape fic.

'm Cuccussette, the keeper of a web of bliogs focused on fanfics about Snape and Slytherins. I have translated your work in Italian, and I'm asking permission to publish it with links to your works and pages. May iplease? I'd like to send you the text in Italian so if you like use it, I'm glad to offer you. Sorry for poor English.

This is a wonderful story. And I do hope it turns into the first chapter for a longer story (hint-hint). Well done, as always.

I hope you plan to continue. It seems a little unfinished to be a one shot.

According to canon, she does know his loyalties by the time your fic starts. She's heard Harry declare them to Voldemort/the world just before they duel and she's also heard (along with Ron) Harry's private account of Snape's memories.

GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY!

sequel?

more plz

good story and strong writing but I would recommend not to use third person present tense ("She goes..") which sounds a little weird after a while and distracts from the story. Would flow better in third person past tense ("She went...")

This is a beautiful story. Will you be writing more?