hey. Great fic. Please update! =P

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Will you continue? You are one of my very few favourite Hermione/Snape authors and I wish you will give me some more stories.
Is this one meant to be only a one-shot? It feels very unfinished.

Oh if only it were true... so what happens when he wakes up?

I think it is a good story, not a soppy one. It could be a prequel of a bvelivable Hermione - Snape fic.
'm Cuccussette, the keeper of a web of bliogs focused on fanfics about Snape and Slytherins. I have translated your work in Italian, and I'm asking permission to publish it with links to your works and pages. May iplease? I'd like to send you the text in Italian so if you like use it, I'm glad to offer you. Sorry for poor English.

This is a wonderful story. And I do hope it turns into the first chapter for a longer story (hint-hint). Well done, as always.

I hope you plan to continue. It seems a little unfinished to be a one shot.

According to canon, she does know his loyalties by the time your fic starts. She's heard Harry declare them to Voldemort/the world just before they duel and she's also heard (along with Ron) Harry's private account of Snape's memories.

GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY!

sequel?

more plz

good story and strong writing but I would recommend not to use third person present tense ("She goes..") which sounds a little weird after a while and distracts from the story. Would flow better in third person past tense ("She went...")

This is a beautiful story. Will you be writing more?

Very insightful, and too true. I like the way in which you seem to understand Hermione, and sincerely hope you'll continue this.

Sara.

i could totally see this being continued. i really enjoyed your writing and the story. the subject of tragedy is a difficult one, it's easy to overdo it. however, i thought you wrote it with care to make it seem realistic enough and not so overly dramatic, which is quite easy to do. anyway, i look forward to reading more of your work and if you continue this then so be it.

Oh, good start! On my LJ (excessiveperky) I have several reasons why I think your story is possible as well. I thought it was shocking that no one seemed to bother about Snape even after Harry announced the Headmaster's true allegiance, but hey, that's Harry for you (and unfortunately, the rest of Hogwarts--they'll mourn Snape if they _have_ to, but raise a finger for him? Yeah, right).

I'm glad Hermione does more in this story. Please continue!

You pulled me right in. I'm looking forward to reading more... I like your veiw of the aftermath, haunting.