very good, only problem is that you're putting it in cliffhangers. I like that, put the reader wanting to read more very clever. please let me see more of the story.

I really liked this story =D
FINALLY a story w/ Jasper in it that's actually GOOD.

A sequel would be awesome. I really like the story, it was very gripping!:)

Pleasee do a sequel!

You should do a sequel.
And I cant believe you killed Jack! That was damn cruel!

Sequels are ALWAYS welcome if the original is good! Well done for finishing.

update soon im intergued and i want to finish reading

Oh, I can't wait for the epilogue and please please write a sequel.

Well since they didn't burn him couldn't Jack put himself together again. PS:!UPDATE!

omg i cant belive u killed him...xD update asap pls

Oh... this last chapter didn't turn out so good for Anna. I hope she's able to forgive the slaying of Jack... ?

please let her forgive Jasper

I agree with WolfGirl(Two guesses: Alice 'saw' Jasper getting killed or Annabel biting Bella. Update soon! I can't wait! Longer chapters would help, though.*hint hint*)! UPDATE!

Oh, you must update. You can't just leave us with that. Update!!

OMG! I wanna read more! Pls update and are you only going to have have eight chapters+a prologue? I think you should write a sequel or something! Does Anna have any powers?