LOVED IT.

This story is so beautifully romantic, excellent! (oh, good point in the last AN btw, i never get the whole condom thing in other stories, wouldn't the venom just disintegrate it?) anyway, gorgeous story :)

Gasp! Gasp! Edward...good in bed?! Car swerving?! Gasp!

:)

i love you. this has to be one of the most beautiful fanfics ive ever come across. please please please write more!

It always starts out with someone else's insomnia. Then I find this fabulous story and I "One more chapter..." my way into the wee hours of the morning myself. Thanks for sharing...

yay! I have more to feed the addiction. I like this so far, I am hooked. Can't wait to see what happens...

Loving this. Especially the "what time?" "Twilight" Perfect

loved it! "I bring you a daughter" was purrfect :D

loving the whole thing so far. its joy is contagious.

Beautifully written,thank you.

Although new to fan fiction I dove into it with relish when I discovered it. I have read dozens of accounts of Bella's "change" and by far yours is my favorite. Bella's retreat through pictures is a beautiful image. I can see her there peering through that window.
Kudos to you for creating this beautiful image!

I've always been of the opinion that vamp semen is venom free.

We have learned from the Twilight universe that venom causes pain. Why would vamps have sex if they felt a burning pain from semen and vaginal secretions? Doesn't make sense.

I'm being gross...aren't I? I'll shut up now.

“I need her. I need to see her every day and be with her every night. I need to make her happy in any way that I can. I know that I don’t deserve her. I know this. But I need her.”

Most powerful and emotional thing I've read in a long time. It is perfect for how Edward sees himself and his relationship with Bella. Bravo.

I am relatively new to fan fiction. My desire for more of Twilight brought me online to read blogs, then they led me to seek out cannon stories of Bella and Edward.
You truly captured Edward in this one sentence, “I bring you a daughter,”.
Thanks for letting me revisit my favorite couple!

nice.