Hey When I saw that you updated I couldnt wait but when there was no chapter and only a note from you I frowned but I suppose I can wait a little longer for you to type up that chapter, I understand what your going threw for I am lagging behind in my stories as well.
Good luck.
~TaciturnNight

Gah I am like screaming here literally waiting for more to come cause I want more to read. T.T
It's good but I kinda wished there was more to it in this chapter but like you said at the bottom things will speed up. I REALLY HOPE SO!

So far so good, good luck!

You did a good job on this chapter. More chapters please when you can do it.

Wow good chapter...I feel bad with her horrible past but I can't wait to find out what happens next...please put the next chapter up soon ^__^

I like it, I would like it even more if you put up the next chapter hahahaha plz? It's like SUPER hard to find Jareth and OC pairs FanFics so if I must beg I shall but put the next one up okay?
Thank you

I like it. I especially like the little details of all the band posters and egyptian incenses. I fully encourage you to continue.

P.S. You might get more reviews if you enable the Anonymous Reviews.

Hey like the character description can't wait for the first chapter ^_^

I understand the idea of introducing your character, but I do not know how important knowing she is a fan of Draco Malfoy and Prince Zuko is. Also why the window scared her would be more of an interesting angle than the collage that she used to hide it. It is also odd that she has all of these things like clocks and signed CDs, but her bed only has a single sheet. It seems rather inconsistent.

Also the spacing and paragraph development are irksome.

I understand your reasoning for wanting to describe your character's room, but it is a little unnecessary. I will reserve judgment until your next chapter.

good start