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| crazedzombie 2008-07-04 ch 5, anon. | abusehow bout showing them in the new seris alien force with older kevin and brenna/ben whatever |
| Yin7 2008-06-22 ch 5,  | abuseAre you thinking of doing a genderbender with Ben 10 Alien Force? |
| tatewaki2000 2008-01-17 ch 5, | abuseNice fic. After Ben is a girl for some long amount of time, he is somehow transported to his old dimension still as a girl. THen Gwen is all freaked out and blah blah blah... Later... Kevin in his old dimension falls for him, but Ben has to choose which Kevin he would rather be with. the end. blah blah. lol :) Just a VERY random plot. lol. Anyway... if the idea doesn't work just ignore it. lol. Ur the writer. Good luck on ur future fics. |
| chao m 2007-12-14 ch 5, | abuseIts spelled XLR8 Ive seen you caption on photobucket there goog |
| Neo Scarf 2007-11-02 ch 5, | abuseThere were a few spelling erroes, and grammatical erros, but I'm not complaining. As far as any sequal ideas, I say go with a wedding! Then vilgax crashes the party, and Brenna has a few new aliens up her sleeve...or in her watch, as the case is. |
| Raven Hufflepuff 2007-10-24 ch 5, | abuseWh at about Brenna 10,0 coming back to the present and helping her younger self and Brenna Ten meeting her future kids Brendan and Devin who look like their parents but Brendan having an onmitrix and Devlin having the engery based powers? |
| Jimmy 2007-10-16 ch 5, anon. | abuseyou should have ben(brenna) just be in an alternate demention and Brenna actually went to bens demention and have Brenna be a boy. But you dont have to its just an idea.Eather that on have ben(breena) and kevin in the future and have ken and devlin as there sons and have the whole family fight evil.Also another idea so email me and i can try to think of more to write if u like my idea otherwise just email me and tell me you dont like it. |
| Sam 2007-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should've made Brenna be a boy again. And Ben/Kevin romance? WTF! Get some f*ing sense! |
| snakeboy33 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseLook, you should have made Brenna turn back into a guy, it makes more sense that way, or at least make everyone not have their memories changed. |
| doomdragonknight 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abusegood |
| dragonsavior 2007-09-17 ch 4, | abuseThis is a very great story and can't wait too read more when written! |
| heartsinlove51 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abusecool |
| stef 2007-09-06 ch 4, anon. | abusenicely done aw |
| Jon 2007-09-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis sucks. . .heres a tip. In your Author Notes don't tell us (the readers) what your characters are doing or their reasons for doing something, or why they said something within the story. Put it in the Story. Also, Get a Beta reader. |