do you even know the difference between SEVERAL and FEW? because you're using it wront!

I LOVE Nathan in this chapter!! A protective/threatening Nathan is the cutest!! :D:D

i love love love ur story, i have read it three times already!! its the best and you should def do a sequel soon. great job!!

One of the best stories I ever read! I can't wait for the squel :P

So i wrote this long review to you, and since i have a stupid laptop it completely erased it by going back...:(
I wanna strangle this right now.
I took over an hour to literally write it no joke. The last time i looked it was like 2:30am now it's almost 3:30...
:(
So sorry if i leave anything out...but since i love this story so much im gonna try to rewrite it...because i'll feel HORRIBLE if i didn't let you know how much this story is amazing.

--

Once again you have completly amazed me and drew me in to this new world.

I know this is going to be hard to believe,but this story has really impacted me...
I know it's weird for me to say that...but it has.
After reading this, I desperatly want to feel the love they have. I'm constantly wondering if their love does exist in this world...and i'm hoping to one day find it.

God,i wrote a heck of alot on my last review, all my tears and heart poured on to it.

Writing that review started making me tear up...

When I first saw this fic you had, and that it had 300 00+ words i was beyond amazed. I love long stories, so i tried to savour this one the best i could.

I was crying my eyes out during the Naley fight...god,Nathan sitting their in the rain...was torture and heartbreaking...

I loved every single banter you put in it...from their fights, to their serious fights.

This story, I felt like I was there,through everything with them. From them hating eachother, to them falling for eachother, to back to hating, to getting married, to becoming friends, to falling in love, to falling apart, and finally to them falling back in love.
God...

Every single word you wrote on this was beyond amazing.
You have amazing writing skills. It wasn't an easy breeze through the park, but it wasn't complicated either...it was perfection.
And on top of that, you have all my ships i love. Brucas, Jeyton and of course Naley. I don't really mind Leyton, but i prefer Brucas...especially in fics.

I feel so lost right now...
I miss this story so much...i know this is going to be so weird to hear...but i feel after reading this ...i feel so...empty. I'm so happy how it ended up, but I'm going to miss reading this so much. I feel like apart of me is still inside that story...since i felt like I was apart of it.

God, i feel like an idiot.

I would read this everyday for hours straight while my family would walk by and see me staring so intently at the screen smiling from all the Naley love. And when they came up to talk to me during an important part i would be like "SH!"

This story and FLF are both so amazing. FLF made me die from laughing and had amazing Naley scenes,but there's something about this one...i just don't know how to explain.
I'm sorry i sound like such a train wreck lol, i'm bad at gathering my thoughts and pouring it all on here.
I love them so much that im considering printing the stories from my computer so i can re read them again whenever i want and wherever.
The only word that comes to my mind to this story is...epic.


:)

Your story is the defination for love. Honestly, when i think of true love, I think of this.
I'm sorry I can't explain it...lol, that's what your story has done to me.

I wanted to cry when Naley were upset and I wanted to squeal when they had Naley sex times or funny banter times.

I feel so lost in this...like i actually experienced what they were feeling.

Sorry about all this babbling, I'm just trying to remember what i wrote before, and from trying not to cry.

Okay Kaitlin, pull yourself together...
Moving on...

I've got to say that i love how you put lots of details on what they were wearing. LOL. I'm actually obsessed to think on what they are wearing at parties...etc. LOL, so thank you, and i love all your clothes u put on them.

At times I wanted to punch and kill Melissa, Greg, Rachel and at one point Nathan lol...for the Naley's fight...I've got to admit when they were fighting I was a little bit leaning towards Team Haley.

Another thing, I want to say thank you.
I know it's a hell alot of work to commit to such a long fanfic...and i am so proud and happy of you for finishing it.
I know it takes alot of time to write this, and to edit this.
So THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU.

There are honestly not enough words to explain what your story has done to me.
I know it's so weird and crazy to say that i got overwhelmed by a fanfiction...but honestly I can't lie... it did.

This has been the best fanfic...wait no story ever. I have read alot of stories but this IS my favourite.

I'm just wondering, and this is truly sincere...but have you won any medals or got nominated for something thing from your fanfics? Because...i wouldn't be surprised.

I loved everything about this...
And omgossh the parts where Haley gets harassed and then there is Nathan to protect her is damn sexy lol.
My number one weakness.

I also loved the relationship with Haley, Brooke, and Peyton the three girls...and Nathan, Lucas, and Jake. Its so cute how they're all friends and they all have one significant other.

Okay so i have 4 minutes remaining on my laptop and hell i do not want this to shut down on m
OMGOD..
I WAS JUST WRITING THAT...and it did.
Phew, it didn't erase anything.

Anyways i better wrap this up and send this.

So to finish it off, i know this probably the most confusing weirdest review you ever gotten, but i just wanted to say thank so much for writing this.
Again, you have no idea how much i am completely in love with this.
You have beat the purpose of the show lol.
You should be extremelly proud of yourself.
Thanks you so much.

Much, much love...

-Kaitlin

(Of course favouriting lol...i wish they had number one favourite fanfic button :)

great story XD

I'm glad there was a happy ending! I started to get worried towards the end :)

Loving this story so far! Good work!

I love travis! Dougie payne, the songwriter and bassist went to my school (highschool and primary) XD so I get taught music in the same classroom as dougie payne from travis did! If also met his mum (lives next door to my friend) and met the rest ofthe band at a party!

Anyway, cool story, I'll check out the rest of your stories when I finnish this, which should be soon since I'm hooked and read all of this in one day XD

Well what can I say, I have just finished Reading your fic. It took me nearly two weeks to read it! I loved it. I never wanted to put it down. It was so good. Your writing skills are amazing, it was a bit detailed at times during the sex parts, but I just got through it LOL, I think it would have been a bit boring if you didn't include details. I loved the last chapter, it ending the story in such a great way, I liked that you included the fact of her thinking he first time they met. Lucas, peyton, Brooke and jake were great. You captured the characters really well. My favourite part of your fic was in one of the really early chapter before the cruise, it was the one where Haley and nathan were arguing in his and Lucas' dorm and melissa walked in when haley was still on nathan back after she tried to get the phone off him! I though it was so funny the way melissa said 'what the ** is going on here', I was expecting her to walk in but the way she said was perfect, I was laughing my head off LOL! Omg I hated melissa and rachel, I really wanted haley to ** slap them but when nathan finally put melissa in her place I was like ' ha you ** LOL' . Anyways sorry about the long review LOL I was just ranting on LOL! I really hope you consider doing a sequel I would love to see more about the couples like brcas and jeyton but still including lots of naley!! Anyway that is all I have to say so byebye! Once again , I loved it!! Ally x

I love this story, I have just re read it again for the second time.

You are an amazing writer and I hope you think about doing a sequel soon.

Okay... So I read this AGES ago (literally this story is like one of the only fanfics I have read in full on this site after a recommendation from a friend) and I realised that I never left a review for it! So I'm gonna make up for that one right now!

I just loved this story... I loved the way it started off and then you kind of went full circle with it, before picking it up again with the present time, that was a really clever idea!

And Nathan and Haley in it... well they were just so cute! I loved it when they first moved into the apartment they were sharing, lol the big pillow thing made me laugh. And when they were on the boat and watching TV together/ getting ready together in their shared bathroom, I just loved it, the banter you created between them was really well done.

And when their feelings started to change I was so happy for them. The dialogue you created for the characters was amazing too, and you kept true to all the characters personalities also which I loved. And the way that they fell in love with each other was just perfectly paced.

Right, I really need to get to work cos otherwise I'm gonna be late but I just wanted to say thanks for writing such an amazing fic and I read on your profile that you are writing a sequel, which I am just so excited about! So keep up the amazing writing and get that sequel out as soon as you can, I'm sure, like me there are loads of people who just can't wait to start reading it!

Emma

hey, i just took a couple days to read through this whole thing...and i'm sure loads of people have already said it to you but this fic was fantastic! it was brilliant! you had the right amount of everything in this fic (drama, supporting charecters, romance, fights) and you made the timeline of them falling in love and even their huge fight at the end so believable. you seriously could have written this for the show...it was SO good. i don't often find fics that are this amazing and i read quite a bit. i LOVED how you added in actual quotes from the show...so romantic and adorable, i even loved the whole minkus thing :P i loved how you had the prologue that made readers go "oh crap" and sorta anticipate naley having drama ...showed how well planned out this was.fantastic job with this, you should be super proud. i loved loved it.

Loved it!

I love this chapter. It's so cute. I love how they finally work things out, it reminds me of something out of a movie. I like the way that Nathan and Haley put each other's fears to rest. I though the part where Vivian and Bill walked in on the making out on the couch was pretty funny. Especially Nathan and Haley's separate reactions. I think it's so sweet that Nathan decided to propose again and I love the way he did it. This was a really great chapter!

Great chapter. I'm glad that all the misunderstandings got worked out and that Nathan said everything he needed to to fully explain himself, down to the little details like him feeling like her mistake and him having called her. If he had just explained himself but not given her that information then somewhere down the road she might still have doubts about what he had meant by their marriage being a mistake and about why he had never tried to contact her and such. I think this chapter is really well done although things were not resolved the way I had thought they would have been. When Nathan told Haley everything while they were sitting in the family room I was expecting Haley to forgive him and when he told her the full story at the kitchen table I was thinking that maybe she would forgive him there but the fact that it broke out into a fight made sense too (especially knowing Nathan and his temper). I have to say however that I was surprised when he called her a "prissy judgemental **", although they used to be like that before I didn't expect him to be able to say something like that after they had fallen in love, he seemed so different after they had fallen in love, although it was pretty funny to see them argueing like that again.

I guess it's true what they say. A passionte couple (like Nathan and Haley) love and hate with the same amount of passion. Anyways there is my super long opinion on this chapter. Great work!

YES! Nathan finally broke away from Dan. I'm so glad he finally got his act together and decided to go fight for Haley. The way he's sitting out in the rain and Haley comes to the house reminds me of season 1 before their first wedding. It's kind or ironic. Anyways, great chapter and I really love this story. It's my second time reading it and it just keeps getting better and better!