 La Vita a Colori 2009-07-09 . chapter 5oh, and you MUST write something about the "printer incident" |
 La Vita a Colori 2009-07-09 . chapter 1oh man "what the deuce??" that's a family guy-ism!! :) |
 The_Popcorn_Fairy_Betch 2009-06-23 . chapter 4 XD Oh yes, L is HELLS-A-SEXY! XD Light's...alright...Mello pwns him, though.. XD lolzors, good job! |
 Sage347 2009-03-06 . chapter 5No take-sy back-sies? Oh, that's awesome.
XD |
 Gaawa-chan 2008-09-21 . chapter 5*Skewers you.*
No smut?! How DARE YOU?!?!?!
:P |
 Bsnowf225 2008-09-03 . chapter 5OMG!
very funy but still serious
“Well I think it’s a good idea! Oh yeah, Ryuuzaki, the Big Bad Kira is trying to seduce you while at the same time figuring out his own sexuality and wondering what the hell he’s doing in the process! You’re all ‘Oh Light-kun I think you’re sexy but please let me explain what I mean but stop talking and kiss me!’ and then you take back because of some stupid hunch of me being someone I’m not! I’ll prove to you I’m not Kira any way I can and if being with you in that way will prove it then by god I’m going to do it, no takes-y backs-ies!!” Cue the arm flailing.
best part of the story,and the part about msa and the part where they got so close,lemon,so goo,but can be sour! LOL
"There's always tomorrow!" |
 XxRagDollxX 2008-08-14 . chapter 5hahaha
Oh my gosh that was awesome!
Good work =P
X |
 Erian-chan 2008-07-21 . chapter 5 NO! You can't let it end like this! *sobs*
me wants romance humor and most of all the two of them bishies just kissing each other senseless! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD |
 Grand-Master-L 2008-07-17 . chapter 5I loved this! And Aizawa's ring tone tells the truth ;) |
 Loveless Minji-chan 2008-07-17 . chapter 5Pure lol and 'Sexiness' I love this! |
 Umino Akiko 2008-07-16 . chapter 5rotflmao! Poor guys. |
 youkai chick supreme 2008-07-16 . chapter 5aw, i love it. i love all of it. sneaky l, how devious. i love it. and i loved light's "impression" of l. cute job. |
 Raimuboy 2008-07-16 . chapter 5XD I loved it! And I do enjoy the conversations L and Light have. Just so you know, my friend thinks hamburgers are VERY sexy (and "hot", too). we had a small argument over it. |
 Michieru Berujironu 2008-07-16 . chapter 5Even though I still hate L X Light, this is still a very written out and sexy story XD |
 Aly 2008-07-15 . chapter 1 Nice. ^^ that was an interesting idea. I certainly couldn't have come up with anything like that! A few mistakes, but overall, it was good and pretty interesting. :) |