|Reviews for See You|
| Guest 2/26/11 . chapter 1
That was so amazingly sad and perfect.
| Steveaaml 6/12/10 . chapter 1
BAH! So sad and sweet and touching! Ash's letter was just gorgeous and perfectly in character and, aw geez. great work!
| sheepeater 8/15/09 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. Just broke my heart reading it, though.
| TrinityFlower of Memories 8/29/08 . chapter 1
OMg...you have a way with words because tears are slipping down my face...wow.
pS: I was so into the story that I only noticed perfection ;D
| Raichu 6/30/08 . chapter 1
Touching and well written.
The ending is weak though. In a story this short, you need some kind of twist or impact at the end that puts a new spin on things.
| PinkCamellia 3/28/08 . chapter 1
Since you read and review my Pokemon stories, I thought I'd return the favor :)
I liked that very, very much.
That "psycho" line was good. I can totally picture Ash writing something like that, but I'm glad he didn't open with it. I don't know why, but I love sad fics as much as I love happy endings, if not more!
I didn't really expect Ash to leave Pikachu to Misty, but it definitely makes a lot of sense that he would. I think that was really sweet. I thought that him returning her handkerchief was a nice touch.
It was very well written. I didn't spot a single error. Great job with this!
| be bright 1/23/08 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! Although the curiosity of how Ash died is KILLING ME! I'm going to assume that's not really an important part of the story. It really isn't. I'm glad I stumbled across this, and now you've got me wondering what else you've written. If you haven't written anything else, you must write more! ...with both characters alive. :P
| Exploding Gears 11/29/07 . chapter 1
so wonderful! i was crying through the end !
| DarkBlaziken 10/6/07 . chapter 1
Ohmygoodness. that was so sad...
though i'm feeling sadistic, especially about Ash. aw well, i don't like him particularly. but this pairing's cute.
liked thi fic. it's angsty. kind of.
| Shadow in the Rain 9/13/07 . chapter 1
i really liked this... made me tear up a little bit... great job! :D
| Damned Lolita 9/8/07 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness, so sad... and so beautiful. You should make this a two-shot, maybe when Misty dies and meets up with Ash. It's such a lovely story... poor Pikachu.
| Jazzy Uchiha 9/5/07 . chapter 1
i liekd it a lot, and i dont even read pokemon
| sadal suud 9/5/07 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh... I'm jealous of you now. You're not one of those people with a really flowery writing style or anything, but you can still pull off such emotions...
My favorite part was when she pulled out the handkerchief. Aww...
| Feball3001 9/4/07 . chapter 1
Sad but well written, I usually don't read Pokemon fics.
| Millie-pops 9/4/07 . chapter 1
It's sweet, sad and oh so cute. It's really just what I needed on the morning two days before I go back to school. I absolutly love this, and the 'mini-plot' (that's what I call the plot in Oneshots) is so...great! it's very rare that I actually prefer sad fics to more happy ones, but this is by far the best fiction I've read in weeks.
I'd write more, but I have a a splinter in my index finger and it really hurts when I type. Best wishes,