That was so amazingly sad and perfect.

BAH! So sad and sweet and touching! Ash's letter was just gorgeous and perfectly in character and, aw geez. great work!

Beautifully written. Just broke my heart reading it, though.

BC :)

OMg...you have a way with words because tears are slipping down my face...wow.

pS: I was so into the story that I only noticed perfection ;D

Touching and well written.

The ending is weak though. In a story this short, you need some kind of twist or impact at the end that puts a new spin on things.

Since you read and review my Pokemon stories, I thought I'd return the favor :)

Oh, wow.

I liked that very, very much.

That "psycho" line was good. I can totally picture Ash writing something like that, but I'm glad he didn't open with it. I don't know why, but I love sad fics as much as I love happy endings, if not more!

I didn't really expect Ash to leave Pikachu to Misty, but it definitely makes a lot of sense that he would. I think that was really sweet. I thought that him returning her handkerchief was a nice touch.

It was very well written. I didn't spot a single error. Great job with this!

Oh my gosh! Although the curiosity of how Ash died is KILLING ME! I'm going to assume that's not really an important part of the story. It really isn't. I'm glad I stumbled across this, and now you've got me wondering what else you've written. If you haven't written anything else, you must write more! ...with both characters alive. :P

so wonderful! i was crying through the end !

RLF

Ohmygoodness. that was so sad...

though i'm feeling sadistic, especially about Ash. aw well, i don't like him particularly. but this pairing's cute.

nice.

liked thi fic. it's angsty. kind of.

i really liked this... made me tear up a little bit... great job! :D

Oh my goodness, so sad... and so beautiful. You should make this a two-shot, maybe when Misty dies and meets up with Ash. It's such a lovely story... poor Pikachu.

i liekd it a lot, and i dont even read pokemon

Oh my gosh... I'm jealous of you now. You're not one of those people with a really flowery writing style or anything, but you can still pull off such emotions...

My favorite part was when she pulled out the handkerchief. Aww...

Nice work!

Sad but well written, I usually don't read Pokemon fics.

It's sweet, sad and oh so cute. It's really just what I needed on the morning two days before I go back to school. I absolutly love this, and the 'mini-plot' (that's what I call the plot in Oneshots) is so...great! it's very rare that I actually prefer sad fics to more happy ones, but this is by far the best fiction I've read in weeks.

I'd write more, but I have a a splinter in my index finger and it really hurts when I type. Best wishes,

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