looking forward to the updates, could use more details and depth. I'd love to see improvments in the next chapter. Also, a nice self edit would have a great impact. thank you for writing.

please hurry and write a nother chappy left

you two are great writers

i hope kerry turns and stays with michel

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awsome fan fiction o and what i the realatin ship beetween michel and vince

great story

Wow, good story. I know that it's been a while since it was updated but is there any chance that you will? Hoping. . .

Aww, that's cute. I can't wait to see the next chapter

lol. Nicole. Gee i wonder where that came from. ... HAHAHAHAHAHA! Vince is soo funny. He's a Michel.. only.. he doesnt have a Kerry... (yet..) or maybe never. { poor Vince. Michel and Kerry are so cute i luv them. ]

-Michel's Lover.

*sighs* You do realise that demanding reviews before updating the next chapter just brings reviews of the wrong sort, right? "OMG! That was so hawt, update NAOW!". Is that what you want to hear? If so, I refuse to demean myself by writing something thoughtless like that. Besides, while reviews are nice, you shouldn't be writing for them in the first place. I'm sorry if I'm coming off as harsh, but I detest it when authors keep back chapters because "they didn't get as many reviews as they wanted".

Seriously, as a review for chapter 5, though. Since you insist... Kerry, yes I know she wants in Michel's pants (who doesn't), but she's also what in CotN, 16? She was acting like something I wouldn't expect. I figured her more shy. And Michel, he, well... I just think he could have been more "smooth", you know? He just seemed off to me. Plus Michel must be an all-knowing sex-god if Kerry's first time was bodice-ripper bliss. Not even an ouchie of discomfort? There is one part where she might have been not writhing in pleasure, but I'm not sure.

An entertaining chapter to be sure, though the lemon wasn't... realastic? I suppose. They are moving awfully fast and I had thought that Michel would be more resistent. I like the bonding thing, even if it has been used before. Though the fact that if Kerry dies then so would Michel doesn't make a whole lot of sense. From what I'm used to reading, either from books, fiction or from Vampire the Masquerade, "blood bonds" or blood exchange, making of servants, ghouls, blood dolls. Well, they're just for the vampires to boss around and snack on. *shrugs* Sure a vampire bonding him/herself to a human is weird because what are mortals other than food, cattle? It's not as if they can change back into being human, so Michel would have to changer her eventually. But whatever floats your boat. It's your story to do as you will.

Lady D

yes. u are every bit cruel and a terrible person. now will you update! I will be severely disappointed if u do not finish this amazing fanfiction! PLEASE! update? soon?

oh. who is it? update soon

Okay, seriously, you are mean. When will the next chapter come out?

XD, is that Vince? I wonder how much he saw

*giggle* I loved it. I cant w8 to find out who the other person was. I hope it was just Vince... lol Update soon!

-Michel's Lover

Crap. I need to update.

I was bored and decided to read this...dont like where i stopped it. On my computer at home, i have a chapter for you guys...SMUT...lol

hm...aneone who reads this then, i think ill update January 2nd or the 3rd.

mark your calender kids D

lol "this is getting old" XDD I can't wait to find out more about marking