Great Story Plz Update It Soon I would like to see what happens next in the story

nice story and can't wait till the next one is out one of your big fans

Eriklover 101

Love it!

Whats next, whats next?

Um ok but you should know that no sane Brit, man or woman would call there child 'Maverick' especially when HP is set

please dont give up on this story

please write more

i really like it

*sly and evil grin*
daphne's mom is good
>:D

Ah, yes... /people/... Damn them.

I find myself wishing that Simon and Mav (best bame I've seen for Harry's brother yet, by the way) had slightly bigger parts, 'cause I like their characters.

It's pretty interesting to see how you give glances of future scenes accompany with past scenes to complete the present scenes to see how everything is going. It's good so far and quite creative.

Nice story cant wait to read more ~Elia LeFae

It's a new story combo (for my reading experience anyway) and you're doing a good job on it.

good story

Your version of Dumbledore just keeps getting worse and worse. He's really turning out to be evil. I'd like to see more of the guardians, if you can work out a way for him to use them without being spotted.

Great chapter mate - oh I love that Flitwick found out about Harry's secret. Whilst talking to Flitwick, Harry found a few things about the Headmaster.

I can't wait to see what happens next, PLEASE update soon.