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Moka777
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
That was awesome :D I wonder if your going to continue this? I liked it its just that I think some parts went a little too fast and like alot too fast, but other than that it was pretty good :D I was looking for some kind of lemony fic and I finally found a good one, lol well keep up the good work XD

-Moka-Chann XD
kallou
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
good job
Crimson Stained Angel
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
Loved it!
Taco Chocobo
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
I liked it! And you managed to keep Gaara (mostly) in character! Good job!
TheDarkestWhite
2008-10-30 . chapter 1
It was cute at the end, all in all I liked it. Job well done.
A Big Fan!
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
Wow, that was the best Lemon of Gaara and Sakura I've read yet.
whoa, I mean, seriously, you are an amazing writter.
Please tell me there will be more!

I wish there was an actual story where Sakura and Gaara
got together and had a family. . .that would be the bestest!
M-dono
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
They weren't OOC really. Only Gaara in the beginning of the story. But the rest, everyone was in character by then.
Just a fan
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
Though it was a little OOC, personally I think the story was awesome! The writer has a right to change things up a little so it's fine. Very tastefully done also. Your grammar is on point. The story flows nicely and "suspends my disbelief" (just a fancy phrase that means the story was believable lol.) Please keep writing because you're on the right track!
Formally known as Freya
2008-01-14 . chapter 1
A very cute and adorable story. The lemon was quite alright too. I find myself loving cute, romantic lemons ooposed to hardcore lemons. I loved your story. Gaara is my favorite Naruto character and I love how you portrayed him in this story. GOod job. Freya has spoken.
Broken-Hearts-of-Angels
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
It's really good! I think it's one of the best one shot moment things i've ever read! that is a lot of credit, so congrats! XD well, I sure enjoyed reading it, you have very good writing skills, and in assurance...ur very good at writing lemons? lolz, I have no idea if I am, but I really hope I do, because my fanfic will have to have a lemon moment in it, lmao! hope it doesn't suck! They arne't that OOC'd, lol, mine are probably worse, so don't even worry bout it ^^
SakuyaBlossom
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
SO CUTE!
franchu7
2007-12-08 . chapter 1
Really nice! I like it!! write more ffs. You are really good in writing lemons (it was so good!).
Thumbs up!!
HollyStorytellerRissaStarling
2007-11-14 . chapter 1
Yes, a big cheer for fluffy endings! I think you kept them in character very well, and I loved the ending. Good story!

AOTFW
UchihaSakuraXItachi
2007-10-08 . chapter 1
-Sque!--cough- >.>; God that was good. x3 Haha. I absolutely loved it. Hehe. I love GaaSaku. Haha dispite my name I really really like it a lot. xP
Valkyrie Wilde
2007-10-07 . chapter 1
That was a cute story! Yes, a little OOC, but thats the beauty of fanfiction. I wish Sakura would have had more control, especially since Gaara was inexperience. But I suppose its a boys nature to take control of any situation, even when they have no idea what they're doing. Thanks for the good story!
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