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| Maggalicious 2008-04-06 ch 7,  | abusei really like this story, i hope you update soon! |
| xemmiex 2008-03-11 ch 7, | abuseI hope you will write more.. this storys so good! |
| virgil-t-stone 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter, Please update again soon |
| Nonagon 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseThis is really good! And you did a great job of keeping everyone in character! Keep up the good work! |
| ivy45663 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseI think they should have hot monkey sex. lol Great chapter, keep up the good work. Love ya |
| enrjy2xs (not signed in) 2007-11-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseNicely done. Gotta love Darry! :) Keep up the good work. |
| Michelle 2007-11-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseI really love how everyone's perfectly in character. Especially Darry. The way he's not rushing things with Cherry is much like his personality, so kudos to you for that. Many authors would have them in bed by the 2nd chapter. Please continue, I really like this story [: |
| ivy45663 2007-11-20 ch 6, | abuseNot a bad chappie, if I do say so myself. Have a great Turkey day and don't freeze. :0) |
| ivy45663 2007-11-18 ch 5, | abuseI can't wait to see what their date is. Have a nice Sunday. |
| ivy45663 2007-11-18 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter. |
| ivy45663 2007-11-18 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter, that was funny Pony wiping lipstick off of Darry, it cracked me up. |
| ivy45663 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abuseAw I love Darry and Pony moments |
| ivy45663 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat start, can't wait for more. Sorry I forgot to review, you should have reminded me. You know I'm scatterbrained :) |
| Ash 2007-11-17 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is a really good story, I love how realistic it is. Keep it up! =) |
| virgil-t-stone 2007-10-02 ch 5, | abuseThis is so cool. I love the concept, never thought of Darry and Cherry but it works, Keep up the good work, look forward to more |