Beautiful and excellent *nod nod* Perfect _

you've made the characters too forlorn and despondent. does NO ONE remember sakura haply, without regrets?

if she had sacrificed herself, the hanagumi should've understood that it was because of her bloodline, and accepted it. shouldn't they her remember as the happy, naive and innocent sakura that lit up everyone's day?

i feel as if i'm lecturing. sumane.

midori is such a spoiled brat that needs spanking!

doesn't kayama or kaede teach her lessons?

your monologue of itsuko is done well - innocent yet mature in understanding.

This is boring. Tell us who is talking in the begining. I can't read it all through in one sitting. (Sorry, I feel so mean!*)

I absolutely loved it! You are incredibly skilled; I applaude this piece!

OH MY GOODNESS! This is so beautiful...I like it! Ganbatte!