PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, UPDATE!

This story is rly good! KEEP GOING!

This was a good chapter, although I'm still a bit confused about what's happening... Hopefully It'll get clearer as the story goes on! Update soon!

This is good, but I'm somewhat confused... Did Link really leave? Was it all a dream? How did Ilia get to Kakariko village without harm? especially just by running? I hope these get answered in the next chapter!

I liked it, very suspenseful. I thought for sure Ilia was going to get caught by the monsters :P Dying to know where Link is but I think I might have an idea.
Most of the chapter was really good, although it did end kind of sudden, and was by no means crappy. Keep it up ^.^

Interesting... where's Link? O.o

That was short.. but good.. don't stop updating plz!

Hmm..

MORE MORE MORE! :D
I'd love to see this continued. It hooked me in. Just take your time ;)