Alessandra:...*scared*

Catherina: *Screaming like a banshee*

Kassy: *Shaking with fear*

My BBFs, Crystal and Emma: *hidding in the corner*

Talim (Me): Um, it was that scary? *still trying to call a certain someone*

Everyone else: Yes, and that jerk Charles ki-i mean bloody murdered both his first wife and Alexis!

Talim: oo...kk...kkay *Scared to hell now*

?: *picks up cell* Hello?

Talim: um Chazz can you come over and help?

Charles:*comes in holding the gun* Now it's all your turns to die

Everyone (except me): *Screams their heads off and runs out the door*

Chazz: *Comes through the door, wraps Charles in a headlock (Making him drops de gun)* What's going on?

Talim: Read the frigging 5th chapter!

aww! I actually like this ending better! It's so sweet and adorable! can't believe it ended. Fantastic job!

aww, they can finally live happily ever after *sniff* such a lovely ending! they deserve it after all they've been through

Charles you PIG! I want him dead! sorry, I'm so angry at him right now. Great chapter, really sad but great

Poor Chazz and Alexis! They better not be getting too comfortable yet! Great chapter! you write the action very well :]

this chapter made me jump in my seat! I love the whole suspense thing! I need to know if Chazz is alive!

I like this chapter, it gives the characters some time to relax a bit :] I hope they can continue the escape plan

aww... i'm so sad now... I love this story! it's so tragic! too abd I'll have to read more later on. keep up the good work!

oh my... you just did it. Your fic made me cry! Ihate Charles so much now! I'm a Christian and I have never heard of that! can I like preach to that man! I really want to slam his head with the bible now!

This chapter is so sad! I'm scared to read more but I'm going to!

aww I can't believe they'd break up a person's love! and a young love! poor thing!

Another great chapter! I'm off to read more!

wow, you can really feel the suspense and everything! I hope Charles never finds them, infact I hope the old man dies a bloody death XD great job!

that's so slack. Men don't have more authority over women! I really don't like Charles now.

This story isn't a downer! it's great! I love the structure and everything! well done!

Aww this is really a great fic! I love this idea! poor Alexis is stuck with an old man. I'm looking forward to reading more. and don't worry I wanted to :]

gosh this story is super nice! :))

as in yeah and the alternative ending thing is super creative too!

i like ending 2 more though xDD

Bad Charles? Sis (your like a sister to me) hes insane..