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| twilightluv13 2008-03-18 ch 8,  | abuseyea luv the kiss ;) and pls review more often :) |
| Quote Mistress 2008-03-13 ch 8, | abuse*sad face* ah! sorry, sorry. My friend's mom just died, and we've been trying to help them out this past month, so im sorry i didnt help you more. I promise i'll help you with your next chappie. *winks* don't worry, that was a good "basketball" sound. |
| Desk.Chibi.Misa-Misa 2008-03-13 ch 8, | abuseohh intresting x3 cant wait for the next chappy !! |
| Erin.Anne 2008-03-12 ch 8, | abuseAwesome story so far, it really makes me wonder what will happen. I can't wait for you to update more! You don't find many stories about Jasper and Alice. -hands cookie- |
| Heatham 2008-02-06 ch 7, | abusePLEASE DON'T LET JASPER DIVORCE/ CHEAT ON ALICE!! That would be insensitive and Jasper isn't; he should have moved on by now- it's been more than 150 years since they went out (and were engaged), and now he's married to someone else. Besides, if it was so fuzzy (he barely remembered her, human memories fade) then why would he want to give up Alice for some girl that you USED TO love. Think about it, if Edward's high-school sweetheart showed up as a vampire, do you think he'd leave Bella? Anyway... do what you must, but I would be crushed if energetic Alice got dumped by sympathetic Jasper. :( By the way, great story idea! |
| Ai Namikaze 2008-02-05 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh it's such a good story... please update it soon! Please? - Ai N. |
| Ai Namkize 2008-02-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseAww! Alice is a **, anyway; I like this story! - Ai N. |
| twilightluv13 2007-12-17 ch 7, | abuseAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHA THAT CHAPTER WAS SOO JOKES!! SEXI BLACK BRA :p?! COUGH THAT PART REMINDED ME OF LAWERENCE DONT U THINK? LOL ANYWAYS GOOD JOB! :D cant wait to read more ;) OMG CHRISTMAS BREAK IN 4 DAIIS! :D |
| oreoxlove4ever 2007-12-16 ch 6, | abusetechnically, jasper didn't 'cheat' if he thought she was dead, and he practically started a new life. jxa |
| Andie 2007-12-16 ch 7, anon. | abusewow jaisie. that was not what i was thinking, but i liked it! sort of rushed, i think it wouldve been better if you didnt end it with that flashback, thingy. but it was good |
| twilightluv13 2007-11-23 ch 6, | abuseomg finnaly a update!:D awsommee chapter love the jasper snapping part :D keep it up ;) |
| Personal.Vendetta 2007-11-23 ch 6, | abuseAw, poor Jasper :[ I still think that he should stick with Alice...but that's just my opinion. And I can't blame you for not updating. Getting into a good high school was really important to me as well. And thankfully, that good work payed off :] ~kat =^-^= |
| Quote Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 6, | abuseoh my jesus! darn, i wanted you to go on lol. i was going for the "do you love me?" and jasper being all silent, and Alice leaving him under the trees and the chapeter ends, but whatev. i like where your going with this. ily too star buddy!! in a friend way of course. |
| EdwardsRealBella 2007-11-22 ch 6, | abuseomc, i didn;t think that was going to happen! makes it more interesting! can't wait to hear the res! //becca// |
| ...I might be Jenna, I may ... 2007-11-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseAha, good. Food for rabid fans trying to pass the months until the next book comes out xD Yet I have to keep reminding myself that Alice wouldn't /really/ act like that, just a Fanfic. GOD. These get me so riled up xD |