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| Seiji 2001-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery dark, what will happen next? You should finish it. |
| Henry Lake Spaulding 2001-08-29 ch 1, | abuseUhhhh..I'm a bit confused. You refer to David as a "little mecha child" with "artificial skin", but he bleeds like a human when he's shot in the head. Which is it? I believe you're saying the bad guys made a mistake, but the reference to David as a mecha doesn't support the ending. ;] |
| Cat's Meow 2001-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow depressing. (I haven't seen A.I. yet though) |