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| toothchick 2008-03-25 ch 10, | abuseYES to the sequel/similar style story! I really loved this story! |
| toothchick 2008-03-25 ch 7, | abuseThe chapter was definitly not average. It was fun & HOT...I just wish that they had not stopped! |
| toothchick 2008-03-25 ch 6, | abuseThe sweetness of Sara experiencing the aquarium for the first time & Gil attentively explaining things to her made me melt! It was so beautiful!! If Sara wasn't in love with the bugman before, that shoul have done it!! OMG! I meant to mention in a previous chapter...when Sara left the gummy worms with the note-for the little boy inside the bugman...I almost cried, because it was such a simple, but loving sentiment! |
| toothchick 2008-03-25 ch 4, | abuseI love the playful Gil & Sara!! I can feel the sparks! |
| toothchick 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuseI loved Catherine's line: ...“You know Sara, this whole gossip and girl talk thing would be a lot better if you co-operated.” This part was cute & sweet: Gummy worms!” Grissom smiled broadly. “I used to love those as a kid.” “Figures!” She chuckled. He blushed slightly. |
| toothchick 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseThe team+ some alcohol+ tima away from work= lots of fun!! |
| regan666 2007-11-14 ch 10, | abuseaw the ending was beautiful, i loved it. i cant believe its the end i really loved thisstory its one of my fav's, you did a great job emma. and wohoo copious amounts of alcohol. please write suming soon! Sinead x x |
| Haldir's Heart and Soul 2007-11-13 ch 10, | abuseI liked it a lot! |
| GRISSOM LOVER 07 2007-11-13 ch 10, | abuseI loved this story alot if you have another one similar write it i will read it |
| Twilight-Flame337 2007-11-13 ch 10, | abuseI loved the story, it was great. |
| Violet44 2007-11-13 ch 10, | abuseHi I have to say that I loved your chapter as well as the story so far. I can not wait to read the rest of the story. Violet44 |
| Wander52 2007-11-13 ch 10, | abuseGreat ending, you tied everything up neatlyand with a sense of hurmor...thanks for the ride...to California...lol. |
| buckit 2007-11-12 ch 10, | abusethanks for finishing the story i enjoyed it |
| meester 2007-11-12 ch 10, | abuse*tear* it's over:( LOVE the story!1 |
| seattlecsifan 2007-11-12 ch 10, | abuseI'm so glad you finished this. It was a very fun story. |