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toothchick
2008-03-25
ch 10,
abuseYES to the sequel/similar style story! I really loved this story!
toothchick
2008-03-25
ch 7,
abuseThe chapter was definitly not average. It was fun & HOT...I just wish that they had not stopped!
toothchick
2008-03-25
ch 6,
abuseThe sweetness of Sara experiencing the aquarium for the first time & Gil attentively explaining things to her made me melt! It was so beautiful!! If Sara wasn't in love with the bugman before, that shoul have done it!!


OMG! I meant to mention in a previous chapter...when Sara left the gummy worms with the note-for the little boy inside the bugman...I almost cried, because it was such a simple, but loving sentiment!
toothchick
2008-03-25
ch 4,
abuseI love the playful Gil & Sara!! I can feel the sparks!
toothchick
2008-03-25
ch 2,
abuseI loved Catherine's line: ...“You know Sara, this whole gossip and girl talk thing would be a lot better if you co-operated.”


This part was cute & sweet:

Gummy worms!” Grissom smiled broadly. “I used to love those as a kid.”

“Figures!” She chuckled. He blushed slightly.
toothchick
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abuseThe team+ some alcohol+ tima away from work= lots of fun!!
regan666
2007-11-14
ch 10,
abuseaw the ending was beautiful, i loved it. i cant believe its the end i really loved thisstory its one of my fav's, you did a great job emma. and wohoo copious amounts of alcohol.
please write suming soon!
Sinead x x
Haldir's Heart and Soul
2007-11-13
ch 10,
abuseI liked it a lot!
GRISSOM LOVER 07
2007-11-13
ch 10,
abuseI loved this story alot if you have another one similar write it i will read it
Twilight-Flame337
2007-11-13
ch 10,
abuseI loved the story, it was great.
Violet44
2007-11-13
ch 10,
abuseHi

I have to say that I loved your chapter as well as the story so far. I can not wait to read the rest of the story.

Violet44
Wander52
2007-11-13
ch 10,
abuseGreat ending, you tied everything up neatlyand with a sense of hurmor...thanks for the ride...to California...lol.
buckit
2007-11-12
ch 10,
abusethanks for finishing the story
i enjoyed it
meester
2007-11-12
ch 10,
abuse*tear* it's over:( LOVE the story!1
seattlecsifan
2007-11-12
ch 10,
abuseI'm so glad you finished this. It was a very fun story.
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