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| SxStrngSamurai13 2008-02-08 ch 1,  | abuseHA, loved it. Excellent dialog and very good characterization of Bruce and Diana. Loved the last few lines...poor Bruce...i think. Anyway, good work, I can't wait to see more! |
| Geeky BMWW Fan 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseAww. How cute. I love Bruce and Diana banter. I liked this exchange the most... “How—“ he asked, his voice more of a croak. “Surely Alfred taught you the birds and the bees.” Diana replied with a grin. “Of course, the baby isn’t yours, so you don’t have to worry.” And this line...“How was I supposed to know when you said your enemies would exploit our relationship, you meant this.” She motioned towards a magazine that lay forgotten on the table." I very much dislike tabloid rags, so I appreciate a story that pokes fun at them. And yeah for a BMWW baby! |
| Protector of Canon2 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseYellow space- wait, that wasn't a reference to the whatsitcalled that the DCU decided had possesed Hal and turned him evil, was it? |
| Ms. Terrible Frostbite 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseVery funny, very cute. I like how you used actual events from the comics (league mind-swipes, Maxwell Lord, etc). Great work. |
| Scarabbug 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseVery, very amusing. ^^ The joys and horrors of the tabloids, eh? I can totally see this happening. The irony about catwoman, though - I assume that part was inspired from the current comic books continuity? |
| Hepburn 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was very cute! I enjoyed the "National Enquirerness" of it all, and the playful and loving banter between Diana and Bruce. Fun! Fun! Fun! :) |