thank you so much for this. I have never had anyone do such a simple and yet beautiful thing for ,as writing the story I'v always yearned for but could never have written myself. I could not have asked for a better person to do it than you. I've made all my friends read it and they have all enjoyed it. As, of course, have I. Again, i thank you.

it was good but kinda hard to follow.

girl in black: no that doesn't help at all. as far as i can tell i'm fairly clear but i'd gladly take your ideas if you'd email me. thx.

whoa. really lost. this coulda been cool, except...i didnt quite understand what was going on. sorry, but it was too vague, i think the language needs to be clarified...if that helps at all

:) Another wonderful, haunting piece focusing on a couple I don't particularly favour! Great work, Vashti, I hope to read more of your work. :)