Reviews for Of Oddities and Oranges

Reviews For: Of Oddities and Oranges

RaiMidori 2008-02-02 ch 4,	abusePardon the lateness, Hermi
RaiMidori 2007-12-23 ch 3,	abuseAlright, you're back! I liked the overall feel of this piece, as a regular day after a mission. Overall, I felt that I could have had some more depth, some hidden metaphor instead of just descriptions. Maybe you could have enforced the idea of snow before using it in the end, and also, I felt that sake was a little reminescent of Tsunade and was used to enforce negativity earlier. Also, you could have built on your points, if this is so, so what, just for example. No spelling or grammar problems at all, but personally I felt like you used the word, 'Sakura' too much :) Also, you strayed from an emotional track. I felt like the track could have been deeper and more entertwined with the story. Other than that, such things happen after a long abscence. I'm currently on vacation and my writing skills are depleting by the second :) It still had a warm winter feel, and your descriptions were vivid and lovely. Keep it up, and happy holidays :D
ShipperTrish 2007-12-22 ch 3,	abuseAw...That's so sweet! I love the scene you set and the words you picked to describe it. It's just a flickering moment in time and yet you captured the imagery and emotion it evokes so well. Great job and Merry Christmas to you, too! ^_^
CascadingIris 2007-11-12 ch 2,	abuseThis is just breathtaking - and quite intoxicating. Just reading it I see this completely serene place, and with the describing of the rhythm, you almost see it fade, then reappear. For me, at least. It would make for a fabulous beginning to a novel. :3
RaiMidori 2007-11-05 ch 2,	abuseAfter your comment on my reviews, I find myself looking forward to the alert messages that flood my inbox everyday even more :) What I see from this fanfiction (my interpretation) is: Here is someone thinking. Not just in an everyday thinking, but thinking hard, and going back on all the things that have happened in his (I'm assuming he's male because his 'partner' is female) lifetime. He's trying very hard to find a pattern to all the things that somehow find a way into his lifestyle, but can't quite explain it. He decides that the best way to explain it is, 'a motion', which is neither right nor wrong. As he is elaborating on this, he finds that he can relate this 'motion' to the flow of time and everything around him. Then at this point, his thoughts are interrupted by thoughts of his lover ('Dear You, I say'). At this points he finds the motion even in his own relationship. I was entranced by the underlying message I found in this, that 'the world is so complicated, with motions and rhythms and steps across the bridge of time, but when I'm with you, it doesn't quite matter: We are a part of this world, and the world is a part of us.'. At least, that's my look on it. Is it close to what you wanted to portray? :D Another beautiful work. I adored the ripple effect, with thoughts flowing into eachother and overlapping quite seamlessly. This one is another one of your masterpieces, hermit. I'm working hard to keep up :)
ani 2007-09-16 ch 1,	abusetenth hokage...XD you really know how to write the funniest ones!
Man I'm like bored and stuf... 2007-09-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, Kakashi really does know every thing! LOL! Keep up the awesome writing!
RaiMidori 2007-09-16 ch 1,	abuseLol! Very adorable. You have a great sense of humour unrivaled by any I've encountered before. It's absolutely refreshing! Keep it up!
Saint Dezzie 2007-09-14 ch 1,	abuseThat was just grand. :) The parts about Kishimoto made me giggle. Like hella. Good job - I can't wait to read more of your drabbles C:
Circa 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abuseHaha! That was cute. You should set up your account so that you can accept anonymous reviews. You'll get more reviews that way.
ShipperTrish 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuse“Because Kishimoto drew it that way?” HAHAHA! I love it! =D

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