This is also really great!
I loved it!
I'm a huge EdxWin fan so, this was a treat. :D

Wow. Tht was very stunning, in a nice, warm, natural, and understated way. Absolutely wonderful.

Aww, Kawaii! So sweet. Ed's thoughts were right on the button. (heehee, button...) Great job! ^-^

~Shinjite

that was really sweet! keep up the great work and write more fanfictions!

OMG That is one of the absolute best stories I've EVER READ. It was perfect in all aspects. It had adorable fluff, amazing detail, wonderful emotion, and captured personality perfectly. Keep writing this well and you will definitely become a very famous author one day. This was amazing. I saw no flaws anywhere. I'm lost for words. Amazing story.

It's NICE! you change the story from the middle of book 4 right?
FMA RULES!