|Reviews for Prey for Reign|
| ConDaMon 5/21/10 . chapter 2
OMG please finish this story!
| madmick74 3/31/10 . chapter 2
Please continue this!
| Persephone LoM 11/26/07 . chapter 2
if you dont make more. ill kill you. hurry up!
| WBH21C 11/12/07 . chapter 2
Really liking this!
| Asura Nivas 11/2/07 . chapter 1
great start, and i love the hints of upcoming BxX
| Garret pi 9/7/07 . chapter 1
Okay, where to start.
First off, there's a lot of spelling errors that you need to correct.
He was the big brother she never had, and one of her closets, most reliable friends.
He's a closet? A think to hang clothing in? Closest is the word you're looking for.
Okay, that said. Get a beta. They are of immeasurable help catching things like that.
Next, the timeline. Not gonna criticize your choice of setting it in 2007, all I can say is that Joss has stated that the events of season 8 are approximately 1 and a half years after Chosen, and 6 months after the events in Not Fade Away (the last ep of Angel)
Okay, all that said.
It's a good fic. It's well written, and has a good premise (the forces of good are finally modernizing and stepping back into the game properly). Good for you, it's an ambitious idea for a fic and a refreshing one.
The dance between Xander and Buffy is a little fluffy... but it seems to work.
All in all a good fic and it's being written in a clean and enjoyable manner
My one suggestion though, I'd change the title.. it sounds a little meh in my opinion. Yes, I know... titles are hard to come up with... but prey for reign just sounds a little pretentious and cheesy. Go for understated.
I'm giving this one a solid thumbs up from me. Good job, keep it coming.
| rapunzl 9/5/07 . chapter 1
Well done. It's been a while since I even watched the Buffy/Angel series... serieses... seriesi... geez, what is the plural to series? ;)
Anyhow, I liked the playful way the characters interacted with each other that, stylistically, is very much like the show... even in the most dire of circumstances. :) The running banter is also very Josh-esque. You've always been able to write very realistic dialogue (at least in my opinion); it's definitely one of your strengths.
I look forward to seeing where this goes! :)
| Jak4 9/5/07 . chapter 1
i wonder whats going to happend.
i wanna see were you go with this it looks SOON