OMG please finish this story!

Please continue this!

if you dont make more. ill kill you. hurry up!

Really liking this!

great start, and i love the hints of upcoming BxX

Okay, where to start.

First off, there's a lot of spelling errors that you need to correct.

For example:

He was the big brother she never had, and one of her closets, most reliable friends.

He's a closet? A think to hang clothing in? Closest is the word you're looking for.

Okay, that said. Get a beta. They are of immeasurable help catching things like that.

Next, the timeline. Not gonna criticize your choice of setting it in 2007, all I can say is that Joss has stated that the events of season 8 are approximately 1 and a half years after Chosen, and 6 months after the events in Not Fade Away (the last ep of Angel)

Okay, all that said.

It's a good fic. It's well written, and has a good premise (the forces of good are finally modernizing and stepping back into the game properly). Good for you, it's an ambitious idea for a fic and a refreshing one.

The dance between Xander and Buffy is a little fluffy... but it seems to work.

All in all a good fic and it's being written in a clean and enjoyable manner

My one suggestion though, I'd change the title.. it sounds a little meh in my opinion. Yes, I know... titles are hard to come up with... but prey for reign just sounds a little pretentious and cheesy. Go for understated.

I'm giving this one a solid thumbs up from me. Good job, keep it coming.

Well done. It's been a while since I even watched the Buffy/Angel series... serieses... seriesi... geez, what is the plural to series? ;)

Anyhow, I liked the playful way the characters interacted with each other that, stylistically, is very much like the show... even in the most dire of circumstances. :) The running banter is also very Josh-esque. You've always been able to write very realistic dialogue (at least in my opinion); it's definitely one of your strengths.

I look forward to seeing where this goes! :)

i wonder whats going to happend.

i wanna see were you go with this it looks SOON