How sad! Good fic tho, but sad how u made him disappear again. It sounded like u kept yuna in character too!

T_T sad D:

poor yunie

This is really pretty, i almost cried... but not quite.

You really have a talent for writing this sort of thing. Keep it up!
-AerithHeart

oh! This gave me tingles! I even cried at the end! Sad and happy at the same time. *applauds*

...damn. Hey bud...that is, wow. Nice. *nods head
You say it may not be your best piece of work, so wow, think of the potential you've got, because I love this. You got a talent.