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| Fae Rain 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseOk, this is the first time an avatar story ever made me cry. Once again I will blame lack of sleep and the fact that I am an absolute sap. Amazing. I've never ever read a story where Zuko mourned the death of his father in any way. It made him feel so human and real. |
| gracemis 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abuseA very creative and well told set of stories. The characterizations and uncertainties seem really in character. I also like that you have no problem killing off a bunch of people at the end (war is messy). thanks for sharing your stories! |
| MTBlack 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abuseomg... so nice end :) these and the previous one reminded me of SB a little bit... I've already said i loved the bond between Zuko and Toph, it's so... like siblings. xP You're cruel, you know. How come to do that to Suki... Let' hope nothing like that happen on tv, xP.But that makes the story more realistic (?) 'M done with the drinks, and i really enjoyed it, i'd like to translate them to, eje, i got really bored in the mornings, jii, and now i'll go for the others! (sorry for being such a pest, but I really do like your stories) |
| Hidden but Seen 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThese three pieces were AMAZING!! you had me almost crying at parts. the only problem i had with it was you killing suki but that was your choice so i won't harp on it. And Againg AMAZING WRITING! |
| Ainulindele 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abusegreat ending *-* |
| shinyuy 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abusenot quite sure what it is about this particular part of the drinking series but I've read it several times now and it always pulls something different out of me. A small side note before i rain down more praises.. you might want to think about a bit more spacing or something to signify your scene changes a bit better, you can see where they are but it is a bit abrupt. back to the platitudes - I enjoy everything about your work and the emotional gamut it makes your readers feel. Two things stand out in my mind very clearly... Sokka and Zuko in the throne room and Zuko's collapse in the arena at the end of the story. There are two different Zukos there if you look, but at the same time they are one in the same. Even a bit of Iroh exists here, and it does not come from the Dragon of the West. Thank you for your wondrous work xoxo SY |
| DRumm3rGiRl 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAwseome story hope you'll wirte more! very good with the characters |
| faLLen-dreamz 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abusewhoever said the avatar series was for kids was so wrong. they obviously missed the deep parts and whatnots. Zuko's reaction to his father's death was well-written; i doubt he would have celebrated it much or not felt any pain... and zuko and toph's friendship continues to amuse me. (: |
| The Pterodactyl 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseMy only regret about reading this is that Nick would never have the balls to air an episode where that many people died. I imagine that when the time comes, Ozai will merely be shamed and humiliated, and not dead. Oh well...I guess you can't have everything. The Pterodactyl |
| Lady Flick 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseYou are officially favorite author-ed. C: |
| Jaganshi-Kyou 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseWow... There was so much AWESOME! in these fic, I can't explain it. The Toph/Zuko friendship is one of my favorite parts of reading your stories. Then there's the way you handle the Zutara dynamic... everything about this story is just amazing. I don't have enough praise for this... Sokka, Aang, and even King Bumi... everything is handled with such care. You've got a great grasp on people and relationships. Thanks For The Fic! I've be going back to reread Ozai's Vengance now... Later. |
| Last Butterfly 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my, this was awesome! :D I couldn't stop reading your 'Drink' series! They were all so great! I loved all the Zutara parts, and that Zuko said things out while he was drunk... XD And the ending of Zuko still (or finally) feeling bad because of Ozai, it was really well-thought and so full of emotions... ^.^ I liked it very much! |
| Lucifer's Garden 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, I teared up a little at the end, when Zuko was talking about his father scarring him so deeply. That's...rare. Really, really, really great work. I mean that. :) |
| storm-of-insanity 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI love your writing style and how you make the characters interact with each other. |
| Madam Midnight 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing O__o You write so beautifully and...I loved it! |