this was not bad i actually liked it.

Awwh, that's sweet.

I love it ^^ It's so cute^^

Naw its really not that bad. Two things though; one, you should've put more detail in Ash and Misty's reunion. Two, it probably would've been better to have Ash to greet with everyone else in the group before Misty. Maybe since it was all of Ash's friends you probably should've had Dawn in the mix as well. Other than that nice work keep it up.(PS: Would've been even better if u could've stretched this into a multi fic instead of one-shot.

Future AJ

Peace Out

Sappy? Yes. Crappy? Garbage? Trash? NO WAY! Lovey-dovey? Yup. But you forgot one... FREAKING AWSOME! Most def.

-raises eyebrow- You haven't watched Pokemon in five to six years?
How'd you know about May, Max and the Sinnoh region then?

-thinks- You must read a lot of fanfics. ^-^

I loved your oneshot. Misty is finally reunited with Ash!

AAML! -squeals-

pondertheworld

I was kind of expecting you to use the original japanese names- seeing as you do that a lot. And all those comments at the end tend to be what pokeshippers usually think (and write).

I thought this was great! You can never have too sappy of a story! Their are people years olser than you who make much sappier ones, you should be proud of this! You have a knack for making aamls, you should make more! Great job!

sincerely,
evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML