Wow. Good. Really good. Characterization is spot on. Although Xelloss is considerably more malevolent than he's usually written, the anime never shows his motivations, so it's still accurate. The old sage character is interesting, if a little cliched. I worry about Cyan, though. As a new character, he hasn't done much yet. I do hope he's going to play a larger part in things to come, else he's more an annoyance than anything else. Anyway, thanks, please keep writing. :)

Interesting story, can't wait to see what happens next.

An excellent story. I hope to see more soon.

Very good, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Awesome story! Please write more. I can't critique what I can't find fault with. _ I can't wait to see how this ends.

Very intresting and good it will be intresting to see what happens next, update soon please.

VERY good story! I read the first chapter on the FFML and had to get more! Keep up the good work, I am looking forward to the next chapters

WAI! Mr. Thou, I LOVE the story of the Moon Dragon! And Sylphiel's just plain COOL here. I like Gourry's hidden gift for storytelling too. SUGOI!

This is a really great fic... well-written, and original despite the Star Wars reference _ I especially like Lina's sensei. Lina's crying at the end of the second chapter was also excellent, very in character for both her and Sylphiel. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it from here!

HAHAHAHAHAHA! That was great!

I hope you one day continue this story,

The opening alone deserves coninuation, because it's so damn funny, and it really hooks some claws into the reader's imagination, forcing them to want more! _

Anyway, thanks for writing this piece of work.

*grin* Liking this a lot still, especially with Sylphiel. _ Let us all know when the next chapter comes out, ne?

Very strange and kinda 'Star warish' but hey I liked it.

Bwahahaha! I really liked this fic. The plot was really unexpected, and the whole was written in a really funny way. I'd really like to know the rest of what you had in mind so please continue?

Are you going to finish this? It's great