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| csimouse 2008-04-26 ch 5,  | abuseI just read the story. It was good! |
| CSIvHP11 2008-03-26 ch 5, | abusethe end is hilarious, I'll give you that, I like it |
| Michi the Mischevious 2008-03-14 ch 5, | abuseOh, purty purty please, do a sequel, this was just too good to leave here! |
| CatherineWillowsCSI 2008-01-27 ch 5, | abuseSequel would be sweet. Good story but where is the sex? lol |
| CityCobra 2007-11-25 ch 5, | abusei want one. i totally want one! |
| CSIhottie001 2007-11-03 ch 5, | abuseNice way to end the story kinda weird though i mean did grissom and everyone really have to bust in? I think you should make a sequel it would be really good considering the excellent job you did on this story. Nicely done please do a sequel need any beta you can ask me. Great story. |
| elwing 2007-10-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseLOL! Maybe they should have tried the MGN or the Palms or any other hotal but that one -lol!- That was so funny. You DO need to do a sequel! you cannot have us hanging like that. I enjoyed reading the whole story, but I would like to see how the "questioning" goes. I'll wait for the sequel!! |
| SaraLou 2007-10-10 ch 5, | abusehell yeah a sequel...how do they all react lol! |
| Gryffindor620 2007-10-10 ch 5, | abuseLOL!! Hell yes do a sequel!! That was rich!! Great Chapter!! Update Soon Son!! |
| JennR 2007-10-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseMore chapter please! |
| SoFrost 2007-10-10 ch 5, | abuseLMFAO!! XD XD XD Oh you're good, you're good! It was excellent. XD XD Sweet. ps: Do I want a sequel? Is there a question at all in that? Hell yes I do, so I you can keep it up, go with it! =) Thank you, you enlightened my day with this chap... XD XD |
| SoFrost 2007-10-10 ch 4, | abuseLMAO! Ok that was hilarious, Sara running after the dog... XD I like the tension, the sweetness of it all, and the kiss...sweet, really sweet. Oh and you're good for killer lines. “You’ve got the day off tomorrow so have I,” said Cath, “how about we meet on neutral territory I’ll pick you up and we can check into a hotel.” “On the first date?” said Sara with a wicked smile that sent shivers over Catherine’s body. “Down girl,” smiled Cath. Oh yeah those were definitely well written...nice shot ;) |
| SoFrost 2007-10-10 ch 3, | abuseI like the parallelism with this situation and the one of the first chap. Once again, you made me feel the tension, and the emotion...loved it =) |
| SoFrost 2007-10-10 ch 2, | abuseI love the way each characters interact with one another and I like the fragile Catherine you made there, it's the right tone, and you can feel her torment. And Lindsey...truth comes from the mouth of the kids ...right? =) |
| SoFrost 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI wanted to review the first time I read your fic but I didn't have time then, so here's my reviews with some delay =) I just love the way you describe the action. I mean the first time I read this chap I was on the edge of my seat!! Damn! You're good. |