AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I love Joe and Carolyn! That was so good! :) The beginning was really funny...about bumping into people in the halls, LOL! However, you should really try and stay in one POV...you kept jumping around from first person to third person and back again. The story really would have worked from either POV, as long as you had picked one and stayed consistant with it throughout the story. But other than that GOOD JOB! :)