Well, it seems that because Sherlie was too thin, every fanfic write tends to make Watson the "seme" and let Sherlie be the "uke". I really love the central part : Watson shows that he couldn't fight his feelings instantly, but he is also considerate enough. Well, why don't you try more and write something that would make Holmes x Watson's fans proud of you ? It seems that you are potential, and, what do they say, a good situation-maker !

Yummy. XD

*rolls eyes* ugh those boys. their SO mature.

aw, watson's so adorable! you just can't stay mad at him

Might i add that I also favor Holmes as a submissive?

Wow... That was interesting. Good lemon and the ending was funny!:)

ye hehehehehehe cute! Finally John gets to be the demanding one, yay!

Great again!! And I agree. Basil is the best Sherlock. I love the Watson and Lestraud (sp?) in that show too... They crack me up!! :D

Ho!
Submissive Sherlock-lurve, I love it :D Tehee.
More please.

Aw, Sherlock is so much like a little kid who can't play with a new toy. I'm surprised he wasn't holding his breath until he turned blue.

I'm going to admit, I'm not usually a fan of smut, but this is quite delightful. I hope Mrs. Watson wasn't home :3

Yay for forward Watson ^__^

You HAVE to, HAVE TO, HAVE TO, HAVE TO continue this fic. I love Bottom!Holmes so freakin' much and I loved the end to the second chapter. It's adorable and, oddly, I can see it. It's all bubbly and happy and rawr and hawt. Love it. =3 I'll bare your bebies if you write more hawtness and fluff. A lot of bebies. I'll bare you a cute, fluffy kitten for you, even (somehow). This is well written (I suggest a beta reader, though. I do see some grammar issues), and I enjoyed the flow and direction it went. Keep it up. ..Now. ..Or else. ::shifty eyes::

Wow. That was beautiful~! It fogged up my glasses! I laughed, I squealed, I gasped, then laughed again!

Wow, this is hot! Awesome! ^^ Innocent Holmes is so cute!

Love this story!! Reading it while I'm watching the men themselves!! :P Keep up the great stories!!

This is really well done, first or not. You show a great ammount promise!

One thing though, I would consider going into greater detail about the more... lurid... scenes... (But I say that because this fic was really awesome and I want to find out the rest...)

So please write more soon! (Perhapse this fic from Holmes's POV? *hopeful look*)'