Galbatorix doesn't know where the elves are dear, and they will see past the spell. They won't help him hatch the egg, they'll only allow it to go to it's proper rider.

O! MORE HURY MORE!

I like it! ^^ Please update soon!

THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I practicly cried when Murtagh thought: “And Eragon for leaving me here and not coming to help me.” UPDATE SOON!

Another good chapter! I don't like Adrian very much. He is such a Butthead.
EP

YES!! It's a BOY!! Finally some one put in a BOY!!
Keep upt eh good work!
EP

Hey, just noticed your story cos 1 of your characters has the same name as one of mine! Kyra is a cool name, huh? Where did you find it? Love the story, although things happen a little too fast for me. I suppose I write like that, so I can't talk!

SilverAurora