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| Alexandra Khayman 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseOf course it was Bs and she did it nice by going there! Nice continuation of Void! :D "If you wanted people to take you seriously you should have stuck to teaching. But you wanted to play rough with the boys. Heck, you wanted to be one of the boys. And unless you grew a set while I wasn’t looking, you never got that wish granted. Too bad for your so-called hard-earned respect, but really good for him, cause otherwise he’d be having serious doubts about his manliness if he were falling for you." This paragraph just blew me away. Nice job, once again! :D Alex |