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Reviews For: UNSALVAGEABLE in NYC

Madison Bellows
2007-09-06
ch 1,
abuseAnother great piece of work (no matter who it is read as). No not as angsty, but perfect none the less.
marialisa
2007-09-06
ch 1,
abuseGreat follow up. I've read it as Stella/ Flack, Danny/ Lindsay, and I'm sure I can read it as several other combinations too. Whatever the combination it is hot, hot, hot!

Now, are we going to have the follow up to them at it like rabbits on the conference room table?
mandy9578
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseYou've finally done it! The alphabet is now complete! No more nagging letter U! Anyway, this wasn't so angsty...I actually loved that there was humor in this one!...Love that she had this argument going on in her head...This line had me cracking up like a loon: oh, for the love of Christ! Who cares who boinks whom as long as there’s boinking going on?... Anyway, well done! :)
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