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| R 2008-08-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Amazing. I'm just praying you return to this story, seeing as it's been a while since you updated. Casey's statement is such a shocker, I'm intrigued to see what she has to say for herself, and also how she ended up saying what she said, like what happened in her camp. I'd love to know how Sam and the rest of the family found out and reacted to the news; especially seeing as she has created a split between the MacDonald and Venturi families. The fame aspect is interesting too, as not only is everything being broadcast to the whole country, but there's all the damage control and reducing backlash which is seeing something that is not only a giant problem on a personal relationship level, as a problem on a professional image level too. Which would would make any resolving of the issue like, a million times more difficult. Oh and I've got to say, I love all the code names and the manager dude on the phone - nice touch aha. And Kevin's visions of a life of splendour. ;) I realise it's unlikely, but it would be amazing if you updated this, 'cos it's wicked :)x |
| Timbereads 2008-07-19 ch 1,  | abuseI haven't read the next chapter yet, but with Casey and Derek being famous, you'd think they'd be smart enough to not meet in a public place. It was probably Derek's idea; he's not the sharpest crayon in the box. |
| Admiral Lily 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseHey, Loved how this one started. Were you planning on finishing it or did it sadly get hit by the big mean brick wall call writers block? Hate that. ;) |
| PinkJelly 2008-01-08 ch 2, | abuseWow interesting...MORE! |
| Crimson and Chrome 42 2007-12-08 ch 2, | abuseOh! Intrigue! |
| arbitraryink 2007-11-26 ch 2, | abuseI do hope you plan to continue this. The drama is definitely believable, and you are an excellent writer. - arbitraryink |
| iwannabethefirstme 2007-11-25 ch 2, | abusei love this story its soo different pls update soon |
| Chibi Mistress 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abuseo i wish you would update this story. i'm really enjoying it so far. >:] lol |
| QueenKalasin 2007-11-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease, please, please update this story soon, it's really interesting, and an original take on a fascinating couple! |
| mysterygal02 2007-10-05 ch 2, | abuseNice! |
| ShePromised-SheLied 2007-09-26 ch 2, | abuseWhoa. This is intense. I can't help but feel the pain and anxiety Derek's feeling. You know, I'd really like to see Casey's point of view in this particular moment. Making a drastic decision like that speech couldn't have been easy. Keep up the good work. -Shelied |
| FallenTeenHearts 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseoh wow! I really like this, its a new take to their relationship. I really like how you just jumped to the middle instead of starting in a boring begining of how they went out and all it just jumps into the action. Its really well written. Can't wait to see more =) |
| tigerwhisper 2007-09-12 ch 2, | abuseo how sad! |
| jannikajade 2007-09-11 ch 2, | abuse:-( aw Derek :-( Poor baby. I have to say though, the part about the 'christain mother's assciation' calling them a threat? Nice touch. Very nice. |
| Ishida-Lover0791 2007-09-11 ch 2, | abuseI've read this chapter and all I have to say is to HURRY UP AND UPDATE..I'm so angry at Casey for giving up on them..and yet sad. I hate to see Derek feel so down .. SO UPDATE .. I want to see Dasey already ! Keep up the great work ! |