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Reviews for: A Human Moment - Page 1 of 5
twilight4ever359
2009-12-11 . chapter 4
aw so sad! But good!
smith052293
2009-10-07 . chapter 4
How many more flippin reveiws do need!? I would be extremely upset having spent the time reading both stories only to have no ending!!
twilightobessed40873a
2009-09-08 . chapter 4
OMG! I love your story
CullenxVamp
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
i really like your stories there really good
Michaylalove
2009-07-06 . chapter 4
this is really awsome sequal the story was awsome too
Emberseve
2008-11-25 . chapter 4
Ok, I'm going to give that story a try! BUT PLEASE CONTINUE THIS ONE! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! PLEASE! :]

- Emberseve
Fallen-Petals15
2008-10-28 . chapter 4
oh no please update i love this story
cjm1788
2008-08-10 . chapter 4
this will be for Bloodbath as well. i really liked the story. i especially liked that you killed jake. i've always hated jake as was happy to see him go. did it ever explain why bella was showing human traits right after she was changed, like crying and blushing? i also liked bella's powers. i don't think i've read a fan fic with her turning invisible yet. hope you start up A Human Moment again. would love to find out what happened.
xXxXLover of the DeadXxXx
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
OMG! So sad at the end! I hope, dearly, that you write more soon!
ATLfan
2008-06-26 . chapter 3
LOL after I read your consumed by hate I remembered that I forgot to add this story to the alert! So im just doing this so I can add it!
ATLfan
2008-06-26 . chapter 4
I'll definatly read cosumed by hate! But please update soon!!
an awesome penguin
2008-05-29 . chapter 4
im going to tie this review in with the bloodbath one im not going to lie but bloodbath was kind of wrong in some ways first off you killed of jake what the * is wrong with you? that has to be the most stupidest thing ive ever seen any one ever do in a fan fiction story honestly its just mean and stupid i bet if you put it to vote pretty much no one would like jake biting the ground, also the other problem is in this story when bella and edward do it (id never thought i would say this) you are way way way to descriptive i (and most fans) dont really care about i very explicit seen like those you've probably scared me for life! and once again for enfaces i cant believe you killed off jake that is so wrong in so many ways maybe you should make it that he survives because wolves cant die like that and there head reattaches our something seriously consider it! Now time for the good things :P i liked the idea vampire vs. werewolves stories are incredibly hard to find so yay for u also you are very descriptive except in some places you shouldnt be thats a good thing im very happy that bella and edward are not staying human, our having babies so another yay for you thats about it so write soon
i look forward to finding that jake is alive (hopfully) and skipping explecit scenes... then ill review you soon
Penguin
mekamekameka
2008-04-07 . chapter 4
well i surely vote that you soul post a chapter update here soon.i dot know why but i really like this story..
so please!
:]
-meka
alyson
2008-01-19 . chapter 4
this is good i like it so far
Heather
2008-01-17 . chapter 1
I see that you have more than 10 reviews on your consumed by hate story...so are you going to finish up a human moment? just wondering if i should continue checking on this story...it is very interesting and i would like to know what happens...but then again it has been quite a while since you had an update...please let me know. thanks.
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