This is a very poetic and unique way to sum up the movie "Brokeback Mountain." I really liked it! Keep writing, you're doing an awesome job!

This oneshot was amazing. You understood the characters alot better then alot of the authors who write for Brokeback. This is one of my favorite stories.

Very nice, I liked the interjection of feeling described here and there.
Thanks.

That was a nice story. Well done. :)

What a wonderful story! Really poignant. Good job:)

This is absolutely gorgeous... Love the way that just a couple of little things, like Jack's eyes, tie together the story, but it works so well and it's absolutely beautiful. Well done

Beautiful. What an awesome portrayal of the sequence of events. Hats off to you. Nice job. :)

Jen

Beautifull...
Congratulations