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MAN IT JUST GETS MORE CONFUSING PROBABLY BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT FULL METAL ALCHEMIST. SIGH.

WOW THIS IS ONE CONFUSING STORY!

wow, that was really exciting chapter! Please continue soon!

How sad! Why did Itachi help Lust or Hinata's mother? Did Lust have a name before she became Lust? Will she come back? She's one of my fav characters in FMA. I wonder if Sasuke will come to try to kill Hinata? It would make me feel better if Itachi or Sasuke turned a new leaf and became Hinata's allies... of course we need an antagonist so they have to be evilish! _ I cant' wait for some Ed x Hinata romance though! Great story! I LOVE IT!

Yeah! a crossover with edward and hinata! i always wanted to read on of those wow, a lot happened in just two chapters! good job! :D

OMG! I LOVE THIS PAIRING! GO ED AND HINATA!

intressting crossovers. keep up the good work!

Continue soon!

Wow

HInata end Ed...

Interesting

Hope she learns how to use alchemy

she would be great!

o can't wait to see how this turns out... It's pretty good so far, I think it's to early in the story for criticism, but can you do something with her byakugan or Sho(I don't know how to spell it, it in the fillers...) then there's also the ninjutsu she can use, also gentle fist...

Ohh! Interesting! Yay! -glomps Ed-kun-

And Sasuke-kuso...-pushes Alphonse's metal suit on him-

Gomen, Al-kun, but he needed it! :P

-takes popcorn out and starts munching while watching-

I hope Hina-chan shows off her combat style later and becomes a melee 'alchemist'. :D