Thelma,will come around.

JeanneZ84

James and Florida can get through anything.

JeanneZ84

This isn't good for James,but I think I am liking this story.

JeanneZ84

Well,that is so right,James,wouldn't do that to Florida,unless he was DRUNK.
I can't wait to read more.

JeaneZ84

This is great. I really hope you continue your story because I am totally hooked.

I really liked this story. You are very talented. I mean not many fan fiction writers get the nuance of believable dialogue. I not only believed it, but the plot seemed totally plausible. And it was nice to see the Evans leave the projects.

good

hey

This brought a little tear to my eye if I can say. It was just so nostalgic...

I love this, the characters are so IN CHARACTER. Great Story!

Maude flashback. nice!

I was very impressed, and glad to see the Evans family finally leave the projects. Too bad it was at the expense of the death of Florida.

I thought it was pretty good. I am intrigued. I will come back to this site when I get time from my real job.

I've been without a computer, and so didn't see this chapter when you first posted, but seeing this was like receiving an unexpected gift! :) I am delighted to see Walter and Maude. Thank you so much for including the Findlays in your story, and in such an ingenious way explaining loose ends ... like the name change of Henry to James.

Maude calling the FDNY seems just the sort of thing she'd do. :) You've done such a nice job of portraying Maude as she is in a few sentences, and without overdoing it. I liked this:

"For all of Maude's liberal thinking, she could never truly put herself in the shoes of a young black

couple with limited education just starting out, far from home."

I'll be checking in regularly, now. Thank you for this.

And I really liked seeing another glimpse of Florida, as well. I was saddened to read of her dying, but what happens after is so believable and so well written that I look forward to reading more. Usually such a departure in fan fiction would make reading on a chore, but that is definitely NOT the case with yours. ... And Lisa is adorable!

it would be good if you started a new story on the cheatah girls and put characters from high school musical or twiches in it thanx let me know i will be here a lot cheking for it could u put coments on ur review page becausse i dont have an email thanx let me know

‘Kid Dyn-O-Mite’ I remember. But ‘Junior’, and ‘the militant midget’, those names totally slipped my mind. That’s the great thing about ‘classic TV fan fiction’, it can bring back happy memories, as well as entertain.

Great story, and great work.