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Kuromiya
2009-12-09 . chapter 1
<3 it
Ribbonseal
2009-11-22 . chapter 5
awesum story~!
The recreating of Al's body seems a little easy to me, i think?
but still liked it :D
dark0anglez
2009-11-04 . chapter 3
Is it true you're only sixteen?” asked a bright-eyed girl across from him.

Ed shrugged. “Yeah, so?”

“So, how did you manage to graduate so early?”

well...he actually graduated at like 12, but you don't need to know that...
teehee, love da story!
dark0anglez
2009-11-04 . chapter 2
That's it, they've exchanged their sanity to do all this impossible stuff!
aint that the truth!
LightDarkandChaos
2009-10-13 . chapter 5
A very good thing.
777angeloflove
2009-10-06 . chapter 5
AWESOME~AWESOME! I ABSOLUTELTY LOVED IT!
Neine
2009-08-25 . chapter 5
that was very good. the mystery persists until the end.
Anonymous
2009-08-19 . chapter 5
Aw! X3 Cute! And Alphonse got his body back! It was a good idea for the arrays in the school and the swapping and stuff, but it could have had a bit more drama, make it a bit more enthralling for the reader, ya know?
But, all in all, it was a good story. Good job! *Rock Lee style thumbs up*
Anonymous
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
It's a very good story. It's just that, the carriages don't have coachmen, just the Thestrals and the carriage itself.
Raberba girl
2009-08-09 . chapter 5
Haha, I want to see fanart of Ed sweeping into the Great Hall at Hogwarts with Al and Mustang in his wake. ^_^

A Britain division! So there's MORE of them?! Hahaha...

So - is Edward going to make another philosopher's stone to get his own body back?
Raberba girl
2009-08-09 . chapter 4
Oh no...it's "Team Edward" all over again... (sweatdrop)

I'm glad Hermione's trying to get Ed to cool it. There _is_ such a thing as too much studying, chico! I think it'd be interesting to add a scene or two with Hermione or someone pulling Ed away to relax and play, take a break from the research. Like in the sequence with Nina and Alexander.

"Only in the confines of his rooms did he undress enough to bare his arms to the open air." Smart idea. If the fangirls ever get a glimpse of Edward Elric's bare flesh... (shudder)
Raberba girl
2009-08-09 . chapter 3
HAHA, chimera house-elves, I love that!

I like Ed's explanation for the transmutation circle. "Coded notes," lol... And it figures Ed would beat the Ravenclaws at studying!

"He couldn't just drop his title and get preferential treatment but no one expected him to right all their wrongs. Equivalent exchange." I really like that line.
Raberba girl
2009-08-09 . chapter 2
Since the technical stuff is already known to fans of HP and FMA, perhaps you could summarize a bit when Edward and Dumbledore are explaining magic and alchemy to each other.

Ahahaha! "That's it, they've exchanged their sanity to do all this impossible stuff!"
Raberba girl
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
LOL, “Thank you for coming on such… short… notice."

This is really well-written, good characterization. I liked the first meeting between Ed and the HP trio, and also Ed's reaction to transfiguration.
Sevvy101
2009-06-30 . chapter 5
A delightful, entertaining read.
You are an amazing writer, and this was a great story to read(:

Loved it~
Erika
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