 Kuromiya 2009-12-09 . chapter 1<3 it |
 Ribbonseal 2009-11-22 . chapter 5awesum story~!
The recreating of Al's body seems a little easy to me, i think?
but still liked it :D |
 dark0anglez 2009-11-04 . chapter 3Is it true you're only sixteen?” asked a bright-eyed girl across from him.
Ed shrugged. “Yeah, so?”
“So, how did you manage to graduate so early?”
well...he actually graduated at like 12, but you don't need to know that...
teehee, love da story! |
 dark0anglez 2009-11-04 . chapter 2That's it, they've exchanged their sanity to do all this impossible stuff!
aint that the truth! |
 LightDarkandChaos 2009-10-13 . chapter 5A very good thing. |
 777angeloflove 2009-10-06 . chapter 5AWESOME~AWESOME! I ABSOLUTELTY LOVED IT! |
 Neine 2009-08-25 . chapter 5that was very good. the mystery persists until the end. |
 Anonymous 2009-08-19 . chapter 5 Aw! X3 Cute! And Alphonse got his body back! It was a good idea for the arrays in the school and the swapping and stuff, but it could have had a bit more drama, make it a bit more enthralling for the reader, ya know?
But, all in all, it was a good story. Good job! *Rock Lee style thumbs up* |
 Anonymous 2009-08-19 . chapter 1 It's a very good story. It's just that, the carriages don't have coachmen, just the Thestrals and the carriage itself. |
 Raberba girl 2009-08-09 . chapter 5Haha, I want to see fanart of Ed sweeping into the Great Hall at Hogwarts with Al and Mustang in his wake. ^_^
A Britain division! So there's MORE of them?! Hahaha...
So - is Edward going to make another philosopher's stone to get his own body back? |
 Raberba girl 2009-08-09 . chapter 4Oh no...it's "Team Edward" all over again... (sweatdrop)
I'm glad Hermione's trying to get Ed to cool it. There _is_ such a thing as too much studying, chico! I think it'd be interesting to add a scene or two with Hermione or someone pulling Ed away to relax and play, take a break from the research. Like in the sequence with Nina and Alexander.
"Only in the confines of his rooms did he undress enough to bare his arms to the open air." Smart idea. If the fangirls ever get a glimpse of Edward Elric's bare flesh... (shudder) |
 Raberba girl 2009-08-09 . chapter 3HAHA, chimera house-elves, I love that!
I like Ed's explanation for the transmutation circle. "Coded notes," lol... And it figures Ed would beat the Ravenclaws at studying!
"He couldn't just drop his title and get preferential treatment but no one expected him to right all their wrongs. Equivalent exchange." I really like that line. |
 Raberba girl 2009-08-09 . chapter 2Since the technical stuff is already known to fans of HP and FMA, perhaps you could summarize a bit when Edward and Dumbledore are explaining magic and alchemy to each other.
Ahahaha! "That's it, they've exchanged their sanity to do all this impossible stuff!" |
 Raberba girl 2009-08-09 . chapter 1LOL, “Thank you for coming on such… short… notice."
This is really well-written, good characterization. I liked the first meeting between Ed and the HP trio, and also Ed's reaction to transfiguration. |
 Sevvy101 2009-06-30 . chapter 5A delightful, entertaining read.
You are an amazing writer, and this was a great story to read(:
Loved it~
Erika |