this...is so amazing...YAY!

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE!

Tenten was so cute as a kid! And her family sounds awesome! And the kunoichi's reaction to learning about her family was hilarious.

Now I want to make a fanfic about her family too! Can I use your plot? Please please /please/? I promise I'll give your story the recognition it deserves. And I won't plagiarize your story either.


I was thinking that I should make a crossover between Naruto and FFXII and have the Tenchi find Mjrn out in the wilderness and then have the fiends show up and terrorize the Elemental Countries! I'm going to have fun writing about Orochimaru trying to fight a Behemoth! Nya ha ha ha ha!

What do you think? Will that work? Please tell me your opinion, I'd really like to know if you think it'll be good. Of course, if you've never heard of FFXII please tell me so. And if you have a better idea for a crossover I'd like to know that too.

I really liked this idea of Tenten's life story during a sleepover of all places. It makes less intense, since more of the characters seem to spill their life story while in battle. Hers is more laidback, which I liked. :) And I enjoyed the light kunoichi bonding...and I mean the "light" part. It wasn't too in-depth which is good. Oh! And I also liked how Tenten's talents and interests were the combined ones of all of her family. Swet. :D

I really liked the flashbacks- they were very entertaining! I'd have loved to live TenTen's childhood...

This was a great story! I've always wanted to know Tenten's backstory and was really excited when you gave her one. It really fits her too! The family dynamics with Tenten's family were perfect. I also like the goal she had to protect her family. I really liked this story! Nice job, keep writing!

this story is awesome! i love the backstory you created for tenten, it fits what little we know of her perfectly, great job

this is a great story... I wish you could continue it...

that was really cute and sweet!!
and it makes sence
hm a gypsi
good thinking
XD

Aw! That's so pretty and cute and and and and...awesome!

I love it!

As soon as I log in, this is going in my favorites!

Haha...that's a nice fic. XD I squinted hard to find the NejiTen...I THINK I saw it... :P

I really enjoyed reading this fic! TenTen is so underappreciated and Kishi-sensei doesnt seem to want to give us any back story on her, so its really nice to see fics like this!
You came up with a really original idea, i never would of thought of her family being gypsies, so you get 10/10 for originality :)
I love your style of writing, keep up the good work!
*~DDG~*

Aww -sñiffy- that was so sweet^^

This is a really interesting story, i think the idea of tenten being a gypsies is really creative.