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| GreysAddict21 2008-07-18 ch 3,  | abuseWoah, mean cliffhanger there! I hope you update soon, great beginning. =] |
| pologrmgrl 2008-07-09 ch 3, | abusejust found this and I really like what you have going here hope theres a new chapter soon |
| Wen1 2008-07-03 ch 3, | abuseoh man ! Carry on ! Wen |
| AlechaSeaa 2008-07-01 ch 3, | abusehuh? oh no! the bad guys are there |
| Cable Addict 2008-06-29 ch 3, | abuseWHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?! |
| me 2008-06-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh my gosh, I love stories that aren't the same old thing, and are original and creative. Pplease update soon! |
| scissorhands17 2008-06-27 ch 3, | abusethis is interesting. I can't wait for the next chappie |
| TooMuchCaffine 2008-06-27 ch 3, | abuseNot cool! You make us wait...for this? Its barely a chapter! Update, or feel my wrath! |
| TonyDiNozzoFan101 2008-06-27 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter mate |
| Tiffany 2008-06-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat Job! I love this...its very intriguing! Cant wait till you update again! |
| M E Wofford 2008-06-27 ch 3, | abuseGood heavens! Talk about plot twists!! |
| Megean 2008-06-27 ch 3, | abuseOK, that was really shocking to me. Didn't expect that at all. While I was reading I thought, paramedics not refusing to let him ride with Ziva? Not gonna happen. Paramedics reassuring someone that the sick person is gonna be 'just fine'? So not gonna happen! But therefore I didn't expect you to turn it around like that. Really good. But enought sweating already. Where's the next chapter? - Please?? |
| AlechaSeaa 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWOW that was interesting. it was teh repetition of "you saved my life" that made teh greatest impression on me. |
| Wen1 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abusecarry on ! |
| OhThoseEyes 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseI really like this i hope you continue soon. |