Things I liked:

Good characterization

Wow they really know each other's weaknesses don't they

Like the last line

Really in character

Myst

XD Yay! I've read all of your Fruits Basket fic now XD

I felt that there could be more...but! Overall, I really found the last line hilarious... loved it!

Real original formatting. Couldn't stop laughing my head off at this, I think I busted a rib in the process or something. This was some fic reading.

This was interesting and good. The boys were extremely in character (kudos for that), and the writing itself was good. I also really liked the format you used; it's different, but it really makes me feel like they're speaking what's on their minds, being totally honest. I really liked it.

Nice. I like the unique structure of the story.. and Kyo's cussing, although I don't think he'd ever go that graphic (at least in the manga he didn't) but for some reason I like that kind of cussing, if that makes any sense.

um... ya yuki sounds like a robot and he does not have that much refined vocab and that was OC im sorry if this sounds blunt but just telling you

It was honestly like reading the script to an episode of Fruits Basket but a lot more intuned and gritty. XD I also liked the format of the story. It speaks so much more volumes that way. Hope to see more FB oneshots!

Chii

"That's right, put up your fucking fists, hit me Yuki, HIT ME!"

This line... it made me think, "Geez, Kyo... take a chill pill every now and then."

Still, this was a nice story.

Keep your writing spirit!

Dukoro-chan.

I'm not sure who won the yelling part of the fight, well probably Kyo! He has such a dirty mouth, he needs soap! But we all know who finished it!

Well, if you wanted it to be a pairing fic, you 'failed miserably', is right. It was still amusing however. Three stars!