 EnglandCJP 2009-08-15 . chapter 40Sigh. I didn't think it was possible to love these characters more...but you managed that through this story. Thankyou for sharing this I loved every word and I somehow think I will be reading this more than once. Stunning. |
 EnglandCJP 2009-08-15 . chapter 26Still reading...still feeling it, and it's still so beautifully written. Absolutely loved chapter 26. Oh God, it so better end well!! |
 EnglandCJP 2009-08-14 . chapter 2I love the story surrounding John Paul and Craig and the characters the writers of Hollyoakes created but have only just started reading fan fic based on them. The first couple of chapters I have read of this story just stand out. Not only is it well written but there is an honesty to it that makesit real and moving. I really should be asleep but I'm finding that I can't stop reading. But before I allow myself to continue I just wanted to leave my initial reaction to it on here. Beautiful writing...can't wait to see where you take it. |
 ForeverBossy26 2009-01-01 . chapter 40 The perfect ending to the perfect story. I love how the family find out about them. The tender moments toward the end and JP so confident and affectionate, couldn't ask for more from a story and you definitely delivered well. Thank You so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. I appreciate your dedication once again Thank you and I know that it's all over, but would you consider writing a John Paul and Kieron one. |
 Unsolved 2008-12-22 . chapter 39 What a way for John Paul to step up and take charge, very proud of him. I can't wait to see what the next step in the relaionship is and when or how John Paul will tell his family, really looking forward to that. Thank you for another great chapter and sharing it with us :) |
 Nickeltjuh 2008-12-22 . chapter 39That was soo incredible! The way JohnPaul & Craig were finally really honest with each other since a long time, I hope there will still be more! |
 fanacd 2008-12-21 . chapter 39 I was so disappointed with the way Chapter 38 ended after such
a gripping account of their friendship/love developed so
vividly. I had enjoyed it so much that I was left dangling. But, today, you have added Chapter 39 which has revived me and
made me happy again.
Thank you. |
 fanacd 2008-12-20 . chapter 1 I've read and enjoyed chapters 1 to 38 of the wonderful story, but I have come to a sudden and surprising halt. Please, is there more? |
 ForeverBossy26 2008-12-16 . chapter 38I really need another chapeter. This story is beautiful in it's own way. Even though I've turned into a John Paul and Kieron lover, I have/had my reasons. Seeing Craig like this another side of him in your view, I just can't seem to stop reading. So with that, I hope we get another chapter soon, because I'm dying to see what happens next and I hope they find each other again. |
 Elvish-Princess99 2008-11-25 . chapter 1Oh, for goodness sake. One great chapter and all spoiled because you insisted on using 'he's' instead of 'his'! 'He's' means 'He is'. For example: "...He's mind spinning..." Now surely you didn't mean: "He is mind spinning"? Chapter- good. Grammar- needs work. |
 Nickeltjuh 2008-11-12 . chapter 38Amazing story, I love every new chapter you put up and I am so glad you're still keeping the story going! I feel bad for CRaig & Jp, both being kinda miserable when they could be so happy just being together! Can't wait for more of this awesome story! |
 Louise 2008-10-30 . chapter 37 I love this please write more =) x |
 rose 2008-08-16 . chapter 36 I was happy to see an update. it was a very emotional chapter... please update soon, rose |
 rose 2008-06-23 . chapter 35 oh dear, it just broke my heart. please fix it :-)) rose |
 richese 2008-06-10 . chapter 1This story is great!
JP should get over his issues and be with Craig, or at least, treat him better...
I don't know why, but i don't like Tom... |