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Hibakusha
2009-09-16 . chapter 17
Sweet story!
inviso-gurl
2009-08-16 . chapter 17
O this was such an excellent story, I truly enjoyed it ^_^
Cucolla's fruit
2009-08-14 . chapter 17
Loved the way Jason shows his violente, and dangerous side and still beeing a sweet boy. A happy end seems impossible with those guys but you did it and it fits just so well. Great story,
sheko
2009-07-28 . chapter 17
A very good story . I hope you will keep on writing. Was a a different story then everyone else's ,but great all the same.Good luck at college. I hope you will write a sequel win you have time or feel like it.
BrokenAngelique
2009-07-19 . chapter 17
A great story! In fact, this one inspired me to write one to :P

I hope you find it okay. I haven't copyed anything! XD Just I wanted to write my own.

Thank you for this wonderful story. :)
Elite Gamer 360
2009-07-18 . chapter 17
Pretty Damn good. Although What happened at the ending i was kinda lost there. Did Jason kill the stepfather? And how would this lead to the great battle Freddy vs Jason? I'm not saying this is bad. I'm just saying what happens after that? How did they become enemies if they are friends in this fanfic. I really like this fanfic. but please give me a hint on what the hell just happened?
BloodyRoseSharpThorn
2009-07-17 . chapter 17
...AW? Kinda rushed..but I do that too, so I cannot blame you. Loved this, it was a nice change from grusome and bloody slash in this catagory.
muse of suffering
2009-07-16 . chapter 17
It was freaking awesome, Cheetana! Like I said on DeviantART, I loved the way you described Freddy's abusive step father's graphic death. And, my heart when to my throat whenever freddy was being beaten by, "Him" and Jason could only observe it, but stepped in and helped Freddy when he needed him most.
Kimiko Bella Krueger-Voorhees
2009-07-16 . chapter 17
PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL!
VampiressKatasandra
2009-07-16 . chapter 17
Aww, it's the end! But it was a sweet ending! I loved the whole thing and I hope a sequal could be made. To make it easier with the age thing, if you do make a sequal, just set it like 3 years in the future. ^^

thanks for the awesome story!
BubbleLuscious
2009-06-30 . chapter 2
HMM...GOOD SO FAR...crap i hate the friggin caps lock...
Juniour
2009-06-24 . chapter 16
I cannot believe you did this! ARGH! You wrote one of the best DURN stories I've read in two years, and then just cut it off!? And such a wonderful pairing, too??! YOU'VE GOT TO UPDATE AND FAST, THERE IS NO DOUBT ABOUT IT! JASON AND FREDDY ARE COUNTING ON YOU!

(P.S. If you need any ideas for the plot or anything just let me know. I really don't usual help authors, but your story is just to damn good.)

(P.P.S. Do you have a Deviantart account? If your pretty good at drawing or photoshop, why not post some pictures of Freddy and Jason there? To get an account is free, just don't let it distract you from this story!)

Your number1fan,
Juniour
Tugera
2009-06-24 . chapter 16
Aww.. Jason and his mom's place does sound so nice. ^^

I kinda forgot we're in the past.. It's like the '60s..? XD;

Those two are so cute together. I love Freddy's thoughts on things. XD
Damm, creepy stepfather...
muse of suffering
2009-06-23 . chapter 16
Lmao, I was giggling whenever I pictured Jason chuckling as Freddy was trapped underneath him and Freddy was raving like a lunatic and cursing. I'm glad you updated. The new chapter is wonderful. Keep up the great work, Cheetana! ^^
Kimiko Bella Krueger-Voorhees
2009-06-23 . chapter 16
oh s**t! freddy and jason are in trouble! update soon please!
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