Cool, I really like this fic, good writting and you make me feel that I was there, but it's sad that Marlow couldn't keep her promise.
See you!.
PS: What happen with Otis Waley? Dave never told us...
PS2: I sent the chapter of my traveler fic to another person so you can take your time with the "multiple author" fic...no worries XD see you!

Oh, I really loved this. Great job!