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Nelco
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseLOVE THIS FIC!!

Iris defintly deserved him more than Meiru/maylu

she was willing to give her life for him in MMBN 6

she was quick to protect him when she could have at least got one date with him.
Shintenshin no Jutsu
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseIt might be a weird pairing, but I'm strangely drawn to NettoIris. No idea why either. Great work, you capture their personalities perfectly. Hope to see more from you soon =D
BattleWiz88
2007-09-08
ch 1,
abuseWow... a story about Iris! YAY! Seriously though, wonderful story. It's not too often to see Iris and Netto together... (Trill annoys me...) I always thought they make a better match than with Meiru... But it's all good!
There was one part I was unsure of in your story, and that is when Iris says: "Hikari-kun, are the sunrises like this in Beyonard?" I'm not sure what she meant by that...
Anyways, good work. I hope more people will be inspired to write a Nett/Iris fic someday. :)
Necklace of Raindrops
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is truely "beautiful" *sorry I don't have the patience to put the spaces in
MarshmellowDragon
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abuseWow.

To start, I love the imagery this creates. One can so easily forget how ruined/messed up/etc beyondard was. You recreated it beautifully, though that just may be my morbid appreciation of all things destroyed kicking in >.> But still, the sun (which is usually supposed to bring life) instead bringing the reality of the graveyard city was just...euh...I can't think of the proper word =.= (superlative of amazing?)

And secondly, you wrote in Iris. Which is awesome. (just for the record, I ran a search, and your story is the only one which is displayed after searching for the keyword 'Iris' in Rockman.exe) so double congrats :P Anywho, thank you very much for writing this, twas quite nice to read X3
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